"Watching" (charmeddrabble response, but too long. Argh!)

[cieux]

Title: Watching.
Characters: Mentions the main ones, but told from a random outsiders POV.
Challenge: charmeddrabble's sentence challenge.
MS-Word Count: 1'500.
Author Note: Sort of future fic'ish -- it was an idea that came to me built on one sentence & I managed to include another one in the end as well. Sentences used are under the cut.

Comments

[supernaturalhel]

*applauds* wow, that was fantastic!

[cieux]

Thank you! It was a bit of a new take for me, so I'm really glad you liked it! *hugs*

[tinylegacies]

Wow - that was really awesome :)

[supernaturalhel]

hey- because I'm in awe of everyone participating in nanowrimo, I added the journal (also your writing is inspirational) and I'd like to be included in any filters?
If theres a problem or something, just let me know ;)

[dragonsinger]

And you end it there? *Scrolls up and down* I am completely blown away by this story. The way you pull the reader in through this Elder is fantastic. Everything is filtered from his or her view and it's done beautifully.

I want to know more. What did Piper do? Who is Ashlan?

An excellent, excellent story.