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cinderbella333

Ficathon Entry: Living Legend (2/2)

Jun 29, 2011 21:13

Title: Living Legend

by Musedepandora (see: Master List of Fanfics)

Disclaimer: Doctor Who belongs to various persons and corporations that are not me or associated with me. This piece of fanfiction is written with the admiration and respect for the original work. I claim no ownership of Doctor Who's creations. No profit is made from this ( Read more... )

genre: het, character: river song, fandom: doctor who, character: the doctor, fic: living legend, ficathon, rating: nc17

Comments 84

trialia June 30 2011, 10:16:24 UTC

eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!

(uh, back later when I'm a lil more coherent? :D)

cinderbella333 June 30 2011, 14:50:53 UTC

Oh, I'm so happy that your initial reaction involves a happy face. Prompters really are the judge about whether I succeed or not. :D

"(uh, back later when I'm a lil more coherent? :D)"
I look forward to it!

trialia October 8 2011, 22:53:00 UTC

asfghasdfgsdf.

several re-reads and a few months later, I'm still not any more coherent about this fic. and I still fucking love it to pieces. 'kay? ♥

cinderbella333 October 9 2011, 23:27:18 UTC

Wonderful! :D I'm thrilled that you still enjoy this piece/prompt-fill. Thank you for reading it again and letting me know.

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cinderbella333 June 30 2011, 15:03:00 UTC

What a wonderful piece of feedback! I adored being able to see the specific sections of text that called to you the most and your reactions to them. :D ( ... )

gidget_zb June 30 2011, 14:43:58 UTC

OH. MY. GOD.

There is so much I love about this that I cannot even. I CANNOT EVEN. Jesus. You're my favourite River/Doctor writer for a damn reason, holy. shit.

This was so amazingly perfect and hot and you worked in Mrs. Robinson and Bill Nye and The Princess Bride and I am flailing harder than Matt Smith's alternative to clapping I SWEAR TO GOD.

The smut was... like ridiculously perfect. I kept reading and dreading the end because I NEVER WANTED IT TO END. EVER. EVER EVER.

Oh god the key.

That's he's gonna gold-plate. FUCK YES.

River takes notes in her diary; the Doctor would very much like to leave clues on her body. And like that, he knows that he's going to develop a fetish for marking River.YES. PLEASE. NEW PERSONAL HEAD!CANON ( ... )

cinderbella333 June 30 2011, 15:38:46 UTC

*Flail* Your comment is just so wonderful! I was grinning the whole time I read it ( ... )

gidget_zb June 30 2011, 16:05:06 UTC

You really, really are though. I think this fic may have de-throned 'Timeless Dreams' as my favourite go-to fic though.

I loved all the in-references! Because honestly, everyone thinks that way and they're woven in in such a way that if you get it you sit and flail for a few minutes like a fool, and if you don't they're not so obtrusive that it's jarring.

The smut worked excellently. Honestly, you just opened a whole new can of worms, because now that we know you can do it this well, we'll be bugging you for it forever. But really you had just the perfect mixture of graphic vs descriptive vs feelings. I love smut so much - but sometimes if it gets too technical or uses euphimisms or terms I don't enjoy, it takes me out of the fic. As a writer I tend to write things much more descriptively rather than getting technical, but you blended both and it is perfect. I really really really really hope you write more. As in I hope there is a Word doc sitting open on your computer RIGHT. NOW. lol ( ... )

cinderbella333 July 1 2011, 23:12:51 UTC

I'm relieved to hear that you feel it wasn't too dense with references and thought-processes. Thank you for reassuring me ( ... )

egalitarianmuse June 30 2011, 16:02:35 UTC

Um, um, where are all the comments for this? They need to start pouring in. This was magical. I don't know what to say besides that. I mean, there's the obligatory, 'Hot, so hot,' but there's so much more, too. I won't bore you with all the feelings and rainbows I am barfing (this review is getting weird, sorry); just know that my mind is blown and this is going into memories and this is a great fic and you should feel great.

Whee for Djaq and the Shah. You know those two got up to all the shenanigans together. Fantastic mythose and characterization and plot. (Could I have used a few more 'ands'? I don't think I could have.) I look forward to reading more from you, you're incredibly talented.

owlsie June 30 2011, 16:51:27 UTC

This hits so many of my kink buttons.

>>the Doctor would very much like to leave clues on her body. And like that, he knows that he's going to develop a fetish for marking River.

Nghhh. NGHHHHH.

(incoherent flailing of hands)

owlsie June 30 2011, 16:52:15 UTC

did i accidently reply to a comment instead of the post? @.@ oh well.

cinderbella333 July 1 2011, 22:07:37 UTC

Dude, I have done this so many times before. It's like I'm an LJ klutz. I imagine if there were an LJ STOP sign, I'd have walked into it at some point.

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cassi0pei4 June 30 2011, 16:57:55 UTC

I really, really, really shouldn't have read this at work. In my defense, I opened it being all "EEEEE! NEW CINDERBELLA FIC!" and then once I started reading I couldn't stop - despite the fact that this story is so indecently hot that it deserves to be read in...um...bed...at night...over and over again...yeah...

I'll leave more coherent feedback when I'm not on a computer that coworkers could walk by any second - for now, suffice to say that this story is FLIPPING AMAZING.

cinderbella333 July 1 2011, 22:28:57 UTC

When I read the first line, I was like, 'Oh shit! Should I have put a NSFW warning?' Did you not realize it was NC17 when you started reading? Which I could totally understand if you didn't glance at the rating/notes; after all, I've never written adult material before, so it'd be easy to assume. However, I am terribly flattered by your enthusiasm for my work. :D And the fact that you couldn't stop reading too. :D And the idea that you believe it was indecently hot. :D ( ... )