Ficathon Entry: Living Legend (2/2)

[cinderbella333]

Title: Living Legend

by Musedepandora (see: Master List of Fanfics)

Disclaimer: Doctor Who belongs to various persons and corporations that are not me or associated with me. This piece of fanfiction is written with the admiration and respect for the original work. I claim no ownership of Doctor Who's creations. No profit is made from this

Comments

[leiascully]

How lovely! I really enjoyed it a lot. Very good use of sensory details in the adult bit, and I liked the plot and the fairy story at the end. Excellent banter. I'm proud of you!

[cinderbella333]

Thank you so very much! I was really interested in seeing what your thoughts would be, considering I have really liked your adult River/Doctor work and you have helped me so much with your thoughts on adult material in general. And yes, I totally did breath out in relief when I saw that you had a positive response to my piece. I'm delighted that you enjoyed this story! And that you liked the sensory details in the adult portions. I put a lot of work into that. And I'm also really glad that you enjoyed the plot, use of fairy tale, and the banter. To me, in this story, that was as important (particularly the banter) as the explicit sexual content. I really appreciate that you were willing to read my first foray into NC17 and leave me your opinion. It means a great deal to me.

[stick_poker]

I may have put my hands in the air. I may also have waved them like I just don't care.

This is... this is, and I don't mean this in a bad way at all, you understand me, exactly the sort of smut you were going to write, isn't it? That is, written with such a keen eye for what the characters would really be thinking, to raise all the problems and uncertainties and enjoy them as part of why we care about what they're getting up to, and with the patience to follow their actions through, to not get distracted and rush into the shagging in the way the characters wouldn't have done here. All that stretch of build-up is such a treat in smut fic, because it rarely gets done so thoroughly, with so much involvement.

(Also, yail = favourite new non-existent word. And the 'He hates that key!' 'He loves that key!'. And all the other funny bits.)

[cinderbella333]

Woot! *Pumps fist* I'm so glad that you liked this story, stick_poker. Seriously

[carlylejt]

i apologize in advance for my language but....

Holy Shitballs!!!!!!

that was awesome.

[cinderbella333]

Your language delighted me! Thank you very much! I'm so fucking happy you liked this story.

[r34dinglight]

on my list of fav fics this one will always have a very special place in my ♥, as its not only a great story but the process by which it was created was just way too much fun, wasn't it? see, smut writing is cool! told you it would be!

now get to writing *my* fic plz? ;)

[cinderbella333]

Thank you. :) I'm glad you approve so heartily of the final product. And you're right, the process of working up the nerve to write this piece certainly inspired a lot of fun conversations. Thanks again for dealing with my rants and ridiculousness.

As to your fic . . . It's certainly on the prompt list. :D

[captjackspeanut]

Somewhere out there the universe is being born. Somewhere out there the universe is dying. Everything, every action taken, every choice overlooked, will happen, is happening, and happened. In the center of that limbo, the Doctor feels the entropy of it all in the grasp of River Song's arms.

This made me tear up a bit...but because it was so amazing and magical. Actually the use of the word entropy made me ridiculously happy.lol. You write Doctor/River so well and even though I ship/shipped Doctor/Amy first...I think doctor/river is my ship now and forever.

Thank you for writing such wonderfully enchanted stories. <3

[cinderbella333]

I am so flattered that the story evoked such strong emotions for you. That is such a great compliment. Thank you. And I'm glad to meet someone else who appreciates the word, 'entropy,' as much as I do. I'm also very happy that you feel I write Doctor/River so well and that it has become such a definite ship for you. I have read good Doctor/Amy stories, but my love for Doctor/River will always reign supreme and so I'm always happy to share that shippiness with others.

Thank you very much for reading and leaving me such kind words. They mean a lot to me.