Did a quick-ish pass over what I had written so far, made some small changes, and decided on chapter divisions. Sticking Chapters One and Two here now in preparation for in-progress Chapter Three...

( The story so far... )

Some 1,200 words, written slower than my previous breakneck pace of 500 words/hour. Oh well. Still much faster than my other fics.

( Turin makes his move. )

All right, a bit more. Another hour, and some 700 words of Turin being bored. I have a pretty sure idea of what will happen next, but I am too tired to take this episode to its natural conclusion right now. Anyway, it might have to happen off-screen, as Saeros bores even me. Not unlike Turin, I want to get back to Beleg ( Read more... )

This was harder. Still, almost 500 words in an hour is nothing to sneeze at by my standards. Since this scene is pretty much done now, I shall post it.

It's really kind of liberating to just write this and throw it out there. Is it confusing? Too blatant? I don't care! And I have no idea what will happen next! Whee!

( Platonic friendship is a beautiful thing. )

Welcome to my sockpuppet account! I have cleaned this speedwritten mess up a little and added a chunk at the end. I think it would be fair to say that this represents two hours' work.

The story so far clearly owes something to my general Elf universe, in particular Ecthelion's Alqualonde days. Main problems I can see: there's very little ( Read more... )