Betrayal (One Shot)

May 29, 2009 11:58

It was more than I could bear.

The feeling of betrayal pulsed through my veins as my eyes fixated on the 2 of them, one pinning the other up against the wall, lips ravaging.

Yamada broke free from Takaki’s grasp and pushed hard against the older boy’s chest, his arm lifted up, preparing to throw a punch at his face when he caught a glimpse of ( Read more... )

pairing: takaki/chinen, pairing: yamada/yuto

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chibilover14 May 29 2009, 04:28:30 UTC
O_______________________O;;;

T-TAKAKI... H-HOW COULD YOU DO TH-THAT?! ;_________________; I AM SPEECHLESS WITH HIS WEAK MIND AND A S;DKLFJASD *DIES*

I HOPE HIM AND CHINEN WORK THINGS OUT... ;_______________________;

Well written angst~! xD AND I HAVEN'T SEEN YOU IN FOREVERRR~! MISSED YOUUUU~! *HUGS*

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cislove May 29 2009, 15:52:42 UTC
Haha! (: Hello hello! Yeah haven't had much inspiration for a while. Thanks so much for always supporting me!

LOVES!

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obsessed_makpa May 29 2009, 04:51:11 UTC
Wow. This was nice. Haha. Thanks for this. First time reading from you. I liked it :)

Chuu~

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cislove May 29 2009, 15:53:24 UTC
Thanks so much for readinggggg! (: I'ms so glad you liked it. It's been so long for me, I'm feeling rusty already. Haha.

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cislove May 29 2009, 15:53:47 UTC
:D I'm sorry I made Takaki such an idiot (X

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n0m4tter May 29 2009, 05:53:25 UTC
You're back!!! :D I love your fics and I'm so glad you're writing again :D
Takaki!!! How could you do that to chii!? and yuto!!! you're so kind... aww... sweet ending :)

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cislove May 29 2009, 15:54:25 UTC
Thannnnnnks! (:
Hahahha. I'm hoping for an inspiration soon for a sequel, hopefully. (X

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epicwoah May 29 2009, 08:19:17 UTC
*stabs takaki and stuffs Chii in a closet with Ryutaro in it*

*stabbed by takaki and takachii fans*

Takaki is such an idiot!

his fic was soo sad :( But I think things will work out.. or mre like I hope XDD

Welcome back btw and yes you should totally do a sequel XDD

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cislove May 29 2009, 15:55:14 UTC
Haha actually, after reading some Chitaro fics, I'm starting to like that couple too! :D

I'm really hoping for some inspiration! Hoho.

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