Betrayal (One Shot)

May 29, 2009 11:58

It was more than I could bear.

The feeling of betrayal pulsed through my veins as my eyes fixated on the 2 of them, one pinning the other up against the wall, lips ravaging.

Yamada broke free from Takaki’s grasp and pushed hard against the older boy’s chest, his arm lifted up, preparing to throw a punch at his face when he caught a glimpse of ( Read more... )

pairing: takaki/chinen, pairing: yamada/yuto

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6_balon May 29 2009, 11:16:11 UTC
sequel pleaseeee XD
i love this fic <3
thank you for writing ^^

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cislove May 29 2009, 15:55:38 UTC
Thanks for readingggg! :D I do hope I get some form of inspiration soon. Hahaha.

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nenemaru_18 May 29 2009, 16:51:32 UTC
sugoii~!

even though i love takaki, i'll kill him in this fic...

please do write a sequel...

thanks for sharing!

*"still loving Takaki even though he's a big baka" mode*

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cislove May 31 2009, 10:24:57 UTC
Thanks so much for reading! (: Loves. :D

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miss_miki_mouse May 29 2009, 22:46:46 UTC
this is a great fic 0_0 i loved everything about it--!! great angst ^_^

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cislove May 31 2009, 10:25:14 UTC
Thank you so much for readinggggg! hhaha.

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juriza May 31 2009, 22:03:40 UTC
Awwwww~
Poor Chii an Yuyan ;___;'
*sniffle*
(There should be much more Yuchii-Fic!!)
But the part with Yamajima was soooo~ sweet!
*happy*
(And of course - much more Yamajima-Fic as well!! xD)

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cislove June 1 2009, 23:33:43 UTC
Thank you! (: haha yeah but I like Chitaro as well, was wondering if I should break out and write one for them. (:

And I'm a yamajima fan all the way. Haha!

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miaow_2814 June 1 2009, 16:06:59 UTC
OHH~ TAKAKIIIII~~~~~

btw, I really missed you!
You never updated your LJ anymore~ ):

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cislove June 1 2009, 23:35:02 UTC
Haha sorry for making you wait so long! (X Just hadn't had much inspiration. And I'm getting really rusty. Haha.

Thanks for always reading! loves! (:

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