mixed bag of candy

[citrus_fuzzles]

Quickly I pull out my bus pass and gingerly show it to the driver. Finding my way up the steps the doors close behind me. Down the isle I notice an unpleasant smell and continue walking. Two rows, three rows back I sit down in a seat by myself. I make the mistake of making eye contact with the man sitting behind me. Pickle breathe notices me as

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[sorakaji]

what a rude guy. "Hey, are you homeless?" psh.

[citrus_fuzzles]

He asked if I needed a place to stay, but I hadn't implied that I was homeless in our conversation.

[smallkitty]

How weird. Hope he doesn't bother you again. I once had this crazy guy start talking to me; he told me he was a male prostitute. Before I got on the bus he asked if I had a boyfriend and I yelled "yes!" and ran away.

I like your use of imagery at the end. Very original. You should write more ^_^.