fanfic; cue cards and fix-it kits (jacob/bella)

Aug 14, 2009 14:44

Title: Cue Cards and Fix-It Kits
Fandom: Twilight Series
Character/Pairing: Bella, Jacob/Bella
Rating: PG-13
Word Count: 2095
Summary: "You’ve stopped pretending; fix-it kits and fake smiles work temporarily, but you realize it would be quite a stretch to assume you could hold the façade for an eternity." Bella can't lie to herself anymore, and she ( Read more... )

character: jacob black, book: the twilight series, character: isabella swan, ship: jake/bells, !fanfic

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liasonrocks August 14 2009, 19:55:26 UTC
OMG THAT WAS JUST BEAUTIFUL,AMAZING.

When she dropped that diamond on the floor,i squeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.lol

That was just awesome.

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bloodfusion August 31 2009, 12:10:15 UTC
AW THANK YOU SO MUCH. ♥

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enchantedkiss_x August 14 2009, 20:18:55 UTC
Wow, that was absolutely beautiful, Morgan. ♥

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bloodfusion August 31 2009, 12:10:33 UTC
Thanks bb! <3

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this is like a letter to Stephenie Meyer, telling her what is wrong with her, in second person. vanishing_cake August 14 2009, 20:56:52 UTC
BREAKING DAWN? WHAT? NO, I DON'T KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN. THIS IS TOTALLY WHAT HAPPENED.

Edward was always too...too other but not other half for Bella. So it was lovely how you made the vampires so overwhelming, too grandiose, too much, but made Jacob feel comfortable, feel right.

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Re: this is like a letter to Stephenie Meyer, telling her what is wrong with her, in second person. bloodfusion August 31 2009, 12:12:45 UTC
THERE IS NO SUCH THING AS BREAKING DAWN. THE TWILIGHT SERIES IS A TRILOGY, WHICH ENDED WITH BELLA CHOOSING JAKE, AND THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER.

YAY I'M SO GLAD I MANAGED TO CAPTURE THAT. TY BB! AND LOL @ YOUR SUBJECT LINE. :D

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majestamoniet August 14 2009, 21:36:28 UTC
B-E-A-Utiful.

If only, if only...sigh

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bloodfusion August 31 2009, 12:13:55 UTC
Thanks so much. ♥

Oh I know, right? I wish Meyer had the balls to make Bella end up with who she truly belonged with. :(

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bitsofbrits August 15 2009, 02:09:47 UTC
This was beyond beautiful, and EXACTLY as it should have been. And I think the characters would even agree, before Myer fucked them over. Well done my dear. You should definitely write these two more, and I will loyally follow.

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bloodfusion August 31 2009, 12:15:09 UTC
Thank you so, so much. ♥ I definitely hope to write these two more in future. I love them so much.

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