Comments | clearillusion: We Are All Illuminated [3]

clearillusion

We Are All Illuminated [3]

Jan 26, 2011 21:16

( Part 3 )

Comments 19

avaserenity January 30 2011, 17:57:15 UTC

I'm blown away by this. It just so powerful and sad at the same time. I love the mirror of Dom/Mal with what is happening to Arthur and Eames. So much cool points for this one.

I so wanted to hate Ariadne for what she did to Arthur but I can't.

Would you mind if I rec the hell out of this story? This fic needs serious love.

clearillusion January 30 2011, 20:36:53 UTC

Thank you so much for the love! Feel free to rec away :D

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clearillusion January 31 2011, 20:56:08 UTC

I don't know where to begin with a review that glowing! Thank you so much - I'm really glad you enjoyed it :D

claudia_nic January 31 2011, 12:30:35 UTC

This was amazing! Poor, poor Arthur, and I just don't know what to think about Ariadne. She sold him out so easily, without remorse.But you told this story brilliantly and it all fit so well.

BRAVO!

clearillusion January 31 2011, 20:56:36 UTC

Thank you so much!

skyearth85 January 31 2011, 19:45:13 UTC

you must buy me Kleenex, I have finished mine ;____;
good story

clearillusion January 31 2011, 20:56:50 UTC

Thank you :)

darkhavens January 31 2011, 19:50:36 UTC

Oh, this was heartrending! Well done. *g*

I never would have suspected Ariadne. I was all ready to blame the wife of the most recent mark, but Ariadne's betrayal bit so much deeper.

clearillusion January 31 2011, 20:57:21 UTC

Phew, I'm glad you didn't suspect her. I was really worried it was going to come over too obvious. Thank you!