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Clever Mischief: A Modest Proposal

Nov 27, 2005 11:11

Clever Mischief: Chapter 4: A Modest Proposal
Date: Friday, August 26, 2005
Location: The Three Broomsticks
Character: Fred, George, Madam Rosmerta
Rating: Any Age

( The marrying kind you're not, are you boys? )

Comments 38

kasdie November 28 2005, 23:36:13 UTC

Oh how cute! I'm mocking their foolish idea that they're not the one woman type right now though. Wonderful chapter! Simply wonderful!

rose_whispers November 29 2005, 14:37:35 UTC

Thanks :) *snickers* I'm mocking them too. Silly boys ;)

draconic_rogue November 29 2005, 01:08:27 UTC

Your twins are absolutely wonderful! Conversation like that with them would be quite dizzying too.

rose_whispers November 29 2005, 14:38:52 UTC

Thanks! I don't think I write them so much as simply let them have free rein ;)

sbertie November 29 2005, 01:10:57 UTC

BANTER LOVE.

rose_whispers November 29 2005, 14:39:22 UTC

*snorts* ICON LOVE right back at you!

ficsbygilly November 29 2005, 01:34:12 UTC

I love this fic. It's great, and the twin banter in this one was just perfect. :)

rose_whispers November 29 2005, 14:39:36 UTC

thank you :D So glad you're enjoying it!

bambu345 November 29 2005, 03:41:33 UTC

Your twinspeak is breathtaking! You've captured the cadence and the flow with great ease. I learned (recently) to read my dialogue out loud and this was so fun that I read it to myself (fortunately the kids were elsewher or they'd be certian I'm certifiable!)

rose_whispers November 29 2005, 14:41:02 UTC

Thank you so much :D *giggles* I'm going to have to start reading the dialogue out loud too now just to hear if it sounds different than in my head. I can imagine it makes one look a little... odd. But then, fandom often makes you do odd things...