Comments | clockiesfic: Part 6

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Part 6

Jun 09, 2009 18:33

( Part 6 )

Comments 17

sweetrevenge418 June 10 2009, 05:42:33 UTC

This was awesome!
The part where Pete was trying to describe his love for Patrick to Mikey was spot on!
: D
\o/

lightlove340 June 10 2009, 06:24:23 UTC

I'm sorry, this is maybe kind of rude, but you really need a better beta, or maybe multiple ones, because there were kind of a lot of typos and grammatical errors and it maybe sort of took away from the story, for me. Sorry.

ne0nlazytights June 10 2009, 17:17:35 UTC

I think this was pure happiness, I could be wrong but I know I'm not.

This was fantastic! You did a wonderful job!!!!!

ayedel June 10 2009, 17:31:41 UTC

Its a cute story but you have a lot of grammatical and spelling mistakes & wrong usage of you're and your. And you switch between Spencer going to New Zealand and then Netherlands a few times. Its kind of distracting.

3wishesfreehugs June 10 2009, 19:47:45 UTC

I really liked it, the plot was a great idea and you really followed through with all your plotlines and characters. However, I have some advice? Fire your beta. I'm a bit of a grammar nazi, but a beta needs to know the difference between 'your' and 'you're'. You write well, you just need to clean up your typos and syntax.