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note_sarcasm August 31 2009, 07:56:03 UTC
omg hun i seriously adored every bit of this chapter

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im just so overwelmed by this chapter!

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cloud_forest September 1 2009, 01:36:27 UTC
Squee! :D

What a wonderful thing to hear. Your comments always make me all squishy and dancing inside, lol.

Thank you, as always... I shall try my bestest to have more for you soon ;)

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note_sarcasm September 1 2009, 06:36:33 UTC
Your comments always make me all squishy and dancing inside, lol.?

thats what i felt like when i finished reading this chapter!!

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cloud_forest September 11 2009, 05:04:34 UTC
Hehe, thank ya. You're too kind ;)

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afrocurl September 12 2009, 08:42:56 UTC
You've managed the fine balance of their friendship at this point, and I can't wait or more of what they discover about each other as the vacation continues.

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cloud_forest September 13 2009, 01:39:33 UTC
Thank you :)

It makes me happy that you think I've managed to capture their friendship so far (ie. that it's believable), and can't wait to hear what you think of their further explorations :D

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isdon_isgood9 September 12 2009, 09:06:24 UTC
Ah I love it!!! Especially where Veronica's beating Logan at the video game and his begging for one more chance to beat her. And the switching meals was hilarious. And the ending was sweet. I can't wait for more. Don

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cloud_forest September 13 2009, 01:41:01 UTC
Hehehe, thank you. Believe me, I had a LOT of fun writing this chapter, so the fact that you enjoyed it too just makes it that much better ;)

Really happy you're liking it so far, and am excited to hear what you think of the upcoming bits! :)

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fickledame September 12 2009, 10:21:24 UTC
Oooh, I loved this! Normally I'm all about the angst, but I'm so glad they're bringing happiness to each other at this part of their lives. I loved the meal switching and the pizza. Logan is being adorable. :) Can't wait for more, as usual!

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cloud_forest September 13 2009, 01:46:08 UTC
LoL, yes... angst definitely has its fun points, but so does pure goofiness. So, I'm happy that you enjoyed said goofiness ;)

You just know that under the uber-teenage-guy attitude they showed him having at different times in the show, there was this totally adorable and sometimes silly guy underneath. So, I'm glad you liked my particular take on it, hehe.

More will hopefully be up soon, and as usual, I can't wait to hear your opinions. Until then, thanks for reading and thanks for your always-wonderful feedback :)

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