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cloud_forest

Two Week Stay-cation // (Logan, Veronica, ensemble) G

Aug 30, 2009 23:44

( Two Week Stay-cation ~|~ Second part of Chapter Three )

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cloud_forest September 13 2009, 01:51:08 UTC

Hehe, yeah. I could just hear his thought process. "Holy crap! She's kicking my ass! Dude... that's kinda hot", lol.

I'm glad you enjoyed this one. I had a lot lot lot of fun writing it, so it makes me happy that other people might've gotten a smile or a chuckle out of it too.

Thanks for your always-awesome feedback. See you for chapter 4! :D

love_is_epic September 12 2009, 14:04:57 UTC

I love how much Logan tries to hide that he's being nice to Veronica and how it confuses her. I liked your Veronica thoughts about how their relationship works. I think she does recognize that's how things are with them. And of course the pizza and dinner thing were cute... it really shows how well Logan knows her.

cloud_forest September 13 2009, 01:54:19 UTC

Yeah, I kind of imagined him wanting to help her out in this situation, but because of the nature of their relationship, not being all that big on acknowledging the niceness and stuff. Just like, "yeah yeah. It's awesome. Can we not do the mushy hugging thing?".

Hehe, but anyhoo, thank you for your wonderful comments. You're too kind :)

P.S. Your icon? Pure cuteness. I loved that moment between them in the show. ;)

autumn0000 September 12 2009, 16:28:24 UTC

OMG I loved it!! ♥
I love how each day they are getting closer, and the ending was soo cute!!
Only one thing confused me, I thought they were already on summer vacation, but once I went back and saw it said "at the end of the school year"..it made sense to me that they'd still be in school, so it's all good
I really love this story, I can't wait to read more :)

cloud_forest September 13 2009, 01:57:46 UTC

Hehe, thank you!! :D

LoL, I'm glad the whole timeline thing got cleared up. Stuff like that annoys the CRAP out of me when I can't get a handle on the facts (ie. the facts themselves are conflicting, lol).

I'm glad you like this story so much. Hopefully updates will be coming soon, at which point (as always) I'd love to hear what you think. Until then, thanks again!

utkari02 September 12 2009, 16:52:03 UTC

Very lovely story so far!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!! :D

cloud_forest September 13 2009, 01:58:12 UTC

Hehe, thank you. Hopefully you won't be waiting too long ;)

little_linds September 13 2009, 00:57:50 UTC

Love this! I could definitely see something like this happening in their relationship :D I love that they are get closer but not unrealistically. <3

cloud_forest September 13 2009, 02:01:22 UTC

Well, thank you! I'm really happy that the gradual change in their relationship is believable. As much as I love seeing Logan and Veronica all cuddly with each other, I'm often irked when I feel like an author has just slapped them together. Like, "I know we hate each other at this point in the story/season, but let's make out!!!" ...Unless it's an obvious PWP, lol. ;)

In any case, I'm glad you're enjoying it, and would love to hear what you think of upcoming chapters. Thanks again!