Comments | cloworora: Hic Iacet Occam's Razor (LJi s8e9)

cloworora

Hic Iacet Occam's Razor (LJi s8e9)

Jan 07, 2012 22:02

Dead air coalesced with the murder holes between farmed pines, their trunks deftly delving into a rich stygian loam. The small pulp spaces between each row allowed for only glimpses of the sun's gleam. An outlying fragrance of wood smoke softly permeated the windows and doors of the roomy vehicle. The apricot vault of the heaven rained a bright ( Read more... )

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team_jessie January 11 2012, 01:11:42 UTC

Wow, this is poetic. What terrific use of scenery and pacing! Really enjoyed this!

cloworora January 11 2012, 14:42:00 UTC

I'm glad my pacing is getting better. Sometimes, it's too jumbled and breakneck.

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cloworora January 11 2012, 14:43:15 UTC

Thank you.

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cloworora January 11 2012, 21:00:38 UTC

Thanks.

baxaphobia January 11 2012, 23:21:33 UTC

You have such a gift of making a story come alive. Wonderful entry as always!

cloworora January 12 2012, 17:24:06 UTC

I am glad to have repeat readers and thank you for your kind words.

imafarmgirl January 12 2012, 17:27:43 UTC

What a great story!

cloworora January 12 2012, 17:43:19 UTC

Thank you.