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cloworora

To Slay A Superhero (lji s9e5)

Apr 14, 2014 13:52

To The Technocratic Council of Gamma Insurrection ( Read more... )

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cloworora April 15 2014, 01:00:14 UTC

It depends. How attached to your arms are you? Their quota on mad super scientists is full, but they have been meaning to include more cyborgs.

Thanks for the read and comment like always, compadre.

halfshellvenus April 15 2014, 06:03:50 UTC

This was hilarious, and I loved the details of all the experiments gone wrong and the increasingly frustrated tone of the narrator!

cloworora April 15 2014, 07:35:04 UTC

Very rarely do I honestly feel bad for a character I write. This was one of those times.

kajel April 15 2014, 11:55:56 UTC

This was very amusing! I loved each signature which showed how he was just that much more disillusioned.

cloworora April 16 2014, 08:17:08 UTC

"Apparently, this is the reward I get for years of screwing with super-science. In short, I pissed in God's eye, and he blinked." - Dr. Venture

Thanks for the read/comment.

eternal_ot April 15 2014, 12:41:15 UTC

This was sinister-ly comic...thought he had my sympathies at the end.

cloworora April 16 2014, 08:25:35 UTC

Yeah, I felt bad for the guy as I was writing him. He's an alright dude...you know, for a mad scientist.

Thanks for the praise.

mamas_minion April 15 2014, 16:08:58 UTC

This was great I could picture the fumbling wanna be super villian trying out each new plot. I did feel bad for him though.(I would love to see this in a comic book)

cloworora April 16 2014, 08:32:51 UTC

My favorite part is the reveal that his full robot army isn't cordless. I can't help but feel bad for the guy, though.

Thank you for the compliment.