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[cobycaroline]

Craig Slatterly has been on fire so far this season. He’s been an indomitable force from the second he stepped out of the bullpen.Molly stared at her reflection in the mirror. She brushed her highlighted hair back and focused on the fresh new bloom around her eyes. She sighed and licked her lips, breathing the contempt in deeply

Comments

[antianhedonia]

Oh, wow. My jaw was on the floor reading this. I enjoyed it, though it's so sad.

[cobycaroline]

Thanks for reading. This was the reaction I was hoping for.

[lilycobalt]

Wow. Great story!

[cobycaroline]

Thanks!

[wookiewife]

This should be longer. Maybe 250-300 pages longer. And with a nifty cover. And selling for $7.99 at the bookstore. Because I would read this book in a heartbeat.

[cobycaroline]

Thank you so much! That's exceptionally kind of you. :)

[abstruse_fangrl]

Very well done!

I was wondering how this situation would play out, and what kind of character Molly would turn out to be.

I'd love to read more of this story.

[cobycaroline]

We'll see if there's more rumbling around upstairs...

Thanks for reading. :)

[streetnights]

Excellent entry, with great writing, style, and content.

It hits, and it really hits home (sorry, bad pun) as it wraps up, with only a hit or two what's happening beforehand. The pacing is very well done.

[cobycaroline]

Thank you muchly... and thanks for the feedback!