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[cocaynerayven]

there is something
distant
in his eyes
"what?" i ask
but he just shakes his head and smiles and i
want to be a part of the secret;
i wonder what his eyes could
tell
if he cries late at night
if he loves so deeply
but there is nothing left for me to kiss
but a question mark
and i should only
see it so right as to
leave it there

Comments

[skinfolds]

crappy? i think not. i wish it was that easy to "change my style"... its hard to fall out of old ways i guess.

but you are doing a wonderful job. i like this piece in particular.

[x_expose]

you always were just as beautiful as this... i have always wished i could write the way you write. there have only been two other people in my entire life whose skill ive admired as i do yours. isaura's and rachel's.

you will always be so goddamn amazing, and i hope youve always believed me when ive told you because i told you for awhile. i just think it would be a shame for you not to know how incredible you are.

xmegan
[aka Lei, Corrupted | Beauty]