A Boy and the Sea [5/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Five.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish but bordering on PG; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: Red car, blue car. Ten thousand stupid sheep jumping over the stupid fence.

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Five

Jaejoong wakes the next morning with a fog in his head and a name in

Comments

[yuxo]

WOOOOOOOOOOOT OFF TO READ

[coconutjack]

jesus that's fast! :D

[yuxo]

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[yuxo]

And.

This is where lj's html totally fails me. Lmao. XDDDDD

[ninjacatherine]

womg at the keysmash up there. XDD

I gasped when I saw the update. Everything was so exciting in this chapter. I got spooked out by the description of the house and the lady though (it's 2 am here and I'm alone downstairs). I can't wait till the next chapter! *pats Changmin*

Oh by the way, I think you made a typo near the end. apparition* :D

[coconutjack]

woops! i had harry potter on the brain there. thanks!

i got spooked out by the lady while i was writing it since my back was to a window. 23jrfjjfwejr3sd. <3333 thanks so much for reading and commenting!

[blackblood0688]

UWAH!! CHANGMIN!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! I really love this story. I think I've grown attached to it...<3

I really do hope that Changmin is a merperson. That would be so freakin' awesome.

I'm seriously in love with the boys. Their characters are too cute! Especially baby Junsu~~ <3333

[coconutjack]

changmin isn't a merperson. but he's something like that. XD

i'm really glad you like it! :D *4yo junsu flying kiss*

<3333

[err_rainjung]

YES! I WAS WAITING FOR THIS!

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My heart, I thought Jae was gonna drown...but then there wouldn't be much of a story, right?

I can totally say I love Changmin to bits and pieces. How he rescued jae from 'her'.

And Junsu trying to answer that phone was love.

I can't wait for the next update!

[coconutjack]

i think you'll be loving changmin more in the upcoming chapters. he's been very repressed in the past few and is just dying to bust out. haha. (and no, by 'busting out' i don't mean he's gay. XD)

thanks for waiting, reading and commenting, love
<333

[milollita]

UPDATE YES YESYESYESYEYSEYSE MISS YOU SO FUCKING MUCHHHH!

The part where he talked to the sea...gods, that killed me. Done it before and it's really relieving and I can totally understand how Jaejoong felt.
And and and then his father. Zomg, it just pains pains painnnsss me. His father is so desperate but he isn't doing it right!

LOL even though you said this wasn't a ghost story, I couldn't help but think for a teeny second there that a ghost had caught Jaejoong by the neck or sth. ;p

CHANGMIN COME BACK! His disappearing act only makes us want to read more. Evil!!!

Update przzzzzz!!!!
-gives you Changmin & strawberries-

[coconutjack]

i missed lj too! 8D (damned 3-d life)

personally i haven't done the talking-to-the-sea thing but i'm glad quite a few of you have and agree that it really is therapeutic. 8D jae would be glad.

haha. when i was making it, i couldn't help thinking it was turning into a ghost story too. but no, it really isn't. :D

changmin will be back! *snatches changmin and strawberries* 8D thanks, love! <333

[milollita]

-pokes-
D:

[coconutjack]

ackkkk bb i'm soooo sorry i didn't see your comment! imust have missed it when i clicked the 'marked all read' button in my inbox. T_T i'm so sorry i haven't been updating this story too. school's keeping me busy and i don't have much time on my hands. T_T mianhabnida.

*hands you changmin*

forgive me?