[Oneshot] Fine Line

[coconutjack]

Title: Fine Line
Character: Changmin POV; OT5 (Yoosu, Yunjae if you look close enough :])
Length: Oneshot
Rating/Genre: G
Summary: When the weight of a name is too much to bear

A/N: I'm sorry for this since it's kinda all over the place. I wrote this based on my own experience. Biking around the Han is extremely therapeutic. Will update 'Lost Boys' soon

Comments

[kelseypaige]

oh god i loved this. it was beautifully well-done. i may have to pester you to write more now, because ... god i loved this. ♥ excellent, excellent job.

+mems. (ot5 in my mems, what has the world come to!)

[coconutjack]

thank you very much! i'm glad you enjoyed it! ^^

there's always a place for ot5 *winks*

[jaemint]

beautiful. ♥

*adds to mem*

[coconutjack]

i'm very very flattered. ^^ thank you!

[ch_ar_me]

This is just...wonderful. I wish the boys would have more free time to enjoy excursions like these more. *sigh*

Such a wonderful OT5 to start the day. *___*

*memories*

[coconutjack]

i made it sometime in december when all of the stories about the boys doing too much too fast kept popping up. i was like *_______* DUDES. LET THEM REST.

thank you!~ ^^

[chloe1910]

coconutjack...this is really beautiful...they were so carefree, happy and relax for a changed...the bondning and closeness that you've describes is simply surreal....

I truly hope that the boys have such time to themselves...sometimes I feel sad that for they have to sacrifice so much for the price of fame..but then again..singing and dancing is their passion in life...

This is one beautiful evening of the Dong Bang boys that you've painted for us...and for that, thank you...

[coconutjack]

i'm glad you like it! i enjoyed making it! and i DID promise you happy ot5 after you read 'a clear midnight'+'free flight'. so maybe i should dedicate this to you! ^^

i hope they do too. they overwork themselves. @_@ poor babies. but it's for what they love anyway...if it makes them happy, so be it.

^^

[chloe1910]

You remembered your promise!! Gasp..it would be an honour if you dedicate this to me!! I must put it in my memories then!! Wait! Let me check..i might have it in my memories already...

[coconutjack]

consider the fic yours. ^^

[mickey8]

love this! really, really love this.

the pace is set in such a way that it's moving so fine you wouldn't be surprise to be carried into the story, whole.

though there were many instances where heartaches are inevitable but those were quickly covered with sweetness you feel so comfortable in.

i love, really love how you've managed to show us the slice of heaven that happens in between the hell that envelopes them.

such excellent job done.

~~♥

[coconutjack]

thank you! ^^

i was worried about this fic, actually. it seemed not as fine-tuned to me but oh well. i'm glad you liked it!

[mickey8]

no, really..this piece is really good. i am so overwhelmed by the idea of them..being nothing but just YunHo, JaeJoong, YooChun, JunSu and ChangMin. nobody's there to stripe anything away. it's the close-knit familiarity that outshines everything. i don't see flaws in this anymore ^^

you should keep on writing!!!

[coconutjack]

i like to think the name dbsk makes them immortal. by labeling them with their own names, it makes them well, like you and me. something fans seem to forget sometimes. :]

i will keep writing! thank you!