APTF [5/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [5/?]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: It’s an empty playground they wind up in, swings, slides, seesaws glinting under the weak moonlight; sheen of

Comments

[underknight]

Wow...

You are a damn good writer! I had just read it all the way and now... I actually have a feeling that confusion had taken all over me.

I saw, you don't update that much right? So ... er ... sorryyy if I don't know this story kay?

Yoochun likes Jaejoong here? I meant... not that kind... but the hyung from supermarket is him or he isn't?

You'll see me if you update again okay?

[coconutjack]

thanks for the compliment~! hmm yeah it can be confusing huh? i actually just make stuff up as i go along since i've only planned out the general plot. XD ahhh sorry for that. keke~

can't update much since i'm busy with school but i try! ^^ i'll try to make them come faster.

yeah, yoochun likes jae. he's "nicer" compared to yunho. haha. and yep, the hyung from the supermarket is him. ^^

thanks for reading!

[irerd_taga]

So there are two Kim Jaejoong, one is the adult artist and the other is the boy ghost bent on revenge.
The boy is after Yoochun, isn't he? He's setting up circumstances that will ultimately end with either Yoochun's death or both Yunho's and Yoochun's deaths?
The scene at the park was eerie in the beginning but the make-out session sure erased that thought out of my mind in a sec! Pity it was interrupted by the phone call.

[coconutjack]

*glomps* shush now! XD

i really was planning on letting it come out as eerie. glad it pulled through! ^^

[kurogoma]

boy!jaejoong is back to take revenge on yunho through yoochun?
this is really eerie, and now i can't wait for you to update.

btw, i really like the adult!jaejoong. he is free-spirited, maybe just what yunho needs to unwind himself from his past. but i still can't shake this unsettling feeling about adult!jaejoong though.
though i get a sense that if anyone believes yoochun, it may just be the adult!jaejoong.

i forsee i am going to have problems differentiating between boy!jae and adult!jae whenever i comment from now on

^^

[coconutjack]

ahhh we will see more of these jaejoongs, yes? keke~~ my, boy!jaejoong is rather popular, isn't he? and, don't worry, i'll make it easy on you guys so you'll be able to differentiate boy!jj from adult!jj. ^^

yes, i'm uneasy about adult!jj too, actually. haha. i haven't decided on what his real role is. ^^

[lovelyjae]

Gosh.. I'm starting to wonder if Kim Jaejoong that Yunho sees now is the Kim Jaejoong from his childhood.. Prob taking revenge for killing him.. And maybe the little boy Yoochun sees are the same and one person, just diff ages..

Gosh, can't wait to see what happens..

[coconutjack]

don't give me any ideas now. XD and lord, your theories... *bribes with pocky* ^^

thanks for reading and stay tuned!

[lovelyjae]

Can I use pockies to exchange for Jaejoong? LOL

Me? What did I do? You can bet I'm staying tuned. Wun let you off now.. :p

[zhyune]

awwww jaeho here is amazing. this is really awesome! please update soon! jae doesnt seem to remember yunnie, or else he really is a fantastic actor. yoochun seems really frightened :(((

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UPDATE SOON!

[coconutjack]

hey there! ^^ i saw you'd commented on the previous chapters. sorry if i would only be able to reply to just this one. thanks for the lovely comments~! have a feeling though that jaeho will be fighting for attention with jaechun. ^^ i seem to be in a muddle as to how to write chapters for this story.