APTF [5/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [5/?]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: It’s an empty playground they wind up in, swings, slides, seesaws glinting under the weak moonlight; sheen of

Comments

[314159]

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Okay, I have read fics I've gotten obsessed with but this is RIDICULOUS. I am like. IN LOVE WITH THIS FANFIC kfjlagsdg it tugs at my heartstrings so much and there are some parts where I feel like I am going to DIE because it is so sad, and then there's the Jaeho where I basically fall in love with your Jaejoong and ugh the Jaeho is so sweet and their kisses were amazing and gkljgjd I demand you update this again asap!!-- *kicked* Jk, take your own pace of course, but pleeease update soon because I will be tormented by this fic until the next update. I. Yoochun. Jaejoong's ghost (?). SO CREEPY. So is Yunho's Jaejoong not the dead Jaejoong? I hope not. ;__; This new Jaejoong is too amazing and perfect for Yunho to be a ghost!

edit: I even made a post pimping it at my journal, just now *___* *DIES* Seriously, this is wonderful!

[coconutjack]

*blushes like mad*

...omgoodness i'm speechless but i'll try and give as coherent a reply as i can. ^___^

first off, thanks for reading! honestly i don't think too well of my fics since i'm a very messy writer, so you're compliments are really <3333. second, i love that you love this jae! hahaha! he's actually still not as fleshed out as my previous fic!jaes have been but i'm sure he loves the attention you're giving him ^__^ i'm sorry if i won't be able to update as fast as you guys want me too since omg school is so annoying. TT_TT but i WILL try and get the next chapter out as fast as possible!

and omg you pimped it at YOUR journal! omg i love youuusss. *showers with chocolates* thank you! i'm very flattered. ^__^

[ibaranonamida]

This is so good! But can you let Yunho have a good cry? Because I really need to vent!

[coconutjack]

i've actually been wanting him to do so but he just.doesn't.want.to. stubborn boy. T_T his character keeps rejecting it. don't worry, he's glad you cares for him though. ^^

thanks for commenting!

[faricsyung]

I love the Jaejoong who managed to befriend (soon-to-be-lover-of) Yunho. ;P The personality suits him. Someone who has his own dark past but somehow is carefree enough to be able to reach out to others without really letting anyone unnecessarily poking about it. Yunho badly needs someone like this Jaejoong to rely on. Their moments together are sweet. ^^ <3

That boy ghost, on the other hand, is really creepy. ._. Junsu please protect Yoochun! This Jaejoong and the grown-up Jaejoong may not have any relation, do they? Or maybe they're the same but are different entity? The boy is the dead Jaejoong's feeling of revenge and the adult is who he would be if he was still alive without death marring his (and Yunho's/Siwon's) life?

I think I confuse myself. LOL.

Now I go read Chapter 6. xD

[coconutjack]

lovely comment since you've actually touched on a few sensitive spots (mainly about parts i haven't come about to writing yet but will eventually). i won't say which though~! ^^ and i'm glad you realized that yunho actually needs someone to keep him sane for the meantime (junsu's not much help, obviously. keke~).

thanks for reading and commenting! ^^

[snowflakes_nad]

wow. tht is soo creepy.
tht litle jj is a ghost..n he haunts yoochun.ok. ths is unexpcted. n soo intriguing. bt well done.
*runs off to read d nxt chptr*

[lovemixin]

ZOMMG.. i read 5 chapters in one go ! :D weeeeeeee ~

so so so so... little jaejoong isnt big jaejoong?
little jaejoongie's a ghoost that hates yunho + siwon but siwon's dead so little joongie's going after yunhooo... or maybe, little joongie already went after siwon and that's why he's dead? :O iddkkk T__T lol !

but i honestly do love the yunjae (: aaaahhhw !