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coconutjack

APTF [6/?]

Mar 16, 2008 10:36

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [6/?]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: The room is cold despite the living room being flooded with white morning light coming in through the French ( Read more... )

Comments 37

chloe1910 March 16 2008, 02:52:31 UTC

spot?? mwhahaha...

coconutjack March 18 2008, 00:16:50 UTC

LOL XD easy, there's enough space for everyone~ ^^

butterflyweb March 16 2008, 03:03:56 UTC

Holy shit that last part was terrifying.

*shivers*

It reminds me of the Ring or something. Or the Grudge, whichever freaky movie had that scary little Asian boy running about...

This is such love, and I really suck at commenting to tell you how much love it is, but suffice to say you leave me hanging off every word. I could read your stuff for hours...I just love the flawless detail you put into everything. So excellent.

coconutjack March 18 2008, 00:22:03 UTC

i think the one with the Asian boy running about and terrifying people was the Grudge. i remember the Ring having a girl ghost. XD *recalls freaky movie and shudders*

ahhh thank you! no problem about the commenting since i'm a rather sucky commenter too. XD i really am flattered.

p.s. i love your writing too. il est tres magnifique. i WILL comment one of these days. just...after...i get everything off my back. ^^

314159 March 16 2008, 03:04:00 UTC

SFKLJADKSJFLKSJD SO CREEPY. I got chills during both of the ghost!Jae parts this chapter. I hope he doesn't hurt him! And where is Jaejoong (as in adult!JJ)? He said he'd be back... D: This chapter was great! Good luck with school, and update as soon as you get the chance :) ♥!

coconutjack March 18 2008, 00:27:41 UTC

tehehehe. the next chapter is in the works (i'm going to regret prioritizing it in about two days when i'd have to cram for my paper xD) so we'll all find out! adult!jj is driving me crazy, actually. even though i want him to be someplace he doesn't.want.to. O_O strange character. but i've got him under control now.

chloe1910 March 16 2008, 03:07:21 UTC

OMG!!!

This fic is giving me GOOSEBUMPS!!! I'm glad that I'm reading this in the morning man..the last scene sure scared the hell out of me...

I think he finally believes that Yoochun DID see a little boy....gosh, boy!Jaejoong sure give me the creep..he's really coming back to haunt Yunho and Yoochun....this is bad news...especialyl for Yoochun who just a vulnerable little boy...

Hm, I'm still having slight uneasy feeling over adult!Jaejoong. Well, he has to be real otherwise, Junsu would not be able to see him...but then again, the apperance of adult!Jae and boy!Jae almost simultaneously is too much of a coincidence..but one sounded so evil while the other..is just so nice...hhhmmm....I dunno what to think...

coconutjack March 18 2008, 00:30:19 UTC

muhahaha. >:)

you're right to not trust adult!jj in this one since i don't trust him either...yet. haha. does that make sense? keke~~ authors don't always know the true personalities of their characters. haha. this jj is very mysterious but he's slowly coming around to me.

faricsyung March 16 2008, 03:58:17 UTC

WAAAHHH! That scared me, gah~ I hope it's just a nightmare he'd soon wake up from! x_x At least now Yunho would believe Yoochun, though.

On a lighter note, I really love their day-out - Yunho, Yoochun and Changmin. The flow is nice and easy to imagine.

[ .. he will never ever eat any red-colored Korean food again ]
-- LOL. He'll have trouble eating most Korean food, then. xD Tteok-bog-gi is yummy, it's a pity he couldn't appreciate it yet. Maybe Junsu could help teach/coax him? xP

I keep on wondering about the adult Jaejoong, whether or not he's real. Like chloe1910 mentioned, he should be since Junsu can see him.. but then again, maybe everything actually is not real? Every figment of this world you conjure only exists in Yunho's mind?

Okay, maybe I like [A Beautiful Mind] too much. xDD

Nonetheless, I look forward to your continuation. Thanks a lot! ;DD <3

coconutjack March 18 2008, 00:32:38 UTC

^^ sorry for scaring you. i don't think that's going to be the last though.

hominchun day-out is love. i actually just put it in the last minute! ^^ they're very sweet boys when they want to be. and YES, tteokbukki IS yummy. yoochun's just very...american. hahaha.

jae = real? we'll see! kekeke~!^^ thanks for reading and commenting!