APTF [9/13]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [9/13]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: Something inside of him is cracking like an eggshell being pitted against ceramic and he wonders just how

Comments

[milollita]

Ahh Chunnie is okay!
-sigh-
Thanks to Jaejoong. Yunho was a complete block head the whole time but good thing Jaejong was there to help a bit~

Jaejoong really sounds suspicious and mysterious, and even with my brain shutting down and sleepy eyes, I tried to look for the clues. My brain can't seem to process them.

Even though it seems creepy that Jaejoong erases all the files of himself from Yunho's camera and laptop, it kind of excites me because it's like the beginning to so much more <3

Can't wait for your next chapter~

[coconutjack]

haha that's all right. i'm guessing by the next chapter you'll start to be able to connect everything.

Even though it seems creepy that Jaejoong erases all the files of himself from Yunho's camera and laptop, it kind of excites me because it's like the beginning to so much more
-- i never thought of it that way before, but you're right! ^^

[mickey8]

i refuse to understand the clues... none of it!~

*♥breaks*

[coconutjack]

it's all right, dear. *pats head* <33

thanks for reading and commenting!

[mickey8]

*picking up pieces of broken ♥*

no... it's not alright at all (=.=). it's getting so depressing... everyone will be hurt if this prolongs...

let the pass... remains as the pass. YunJae can work together for the future. don't let the pass holds them back like that... but of course, they will need to overcome this hurdle.

*trash broken ♥*

gimme fluff!~

[coconutjack]

it's getting harder and harder to write in fluff as this story progresses. i have to say i'm not a very good fluff writer either. -__-

aish.

*helps mend your broken ♥ with glue and glitter*

[applepieprinces]

my little brain is too little to absorb much information hehehe...

i just woke up..LOL

be back for a proper comment

[coconutjack]

LOL. i wish i could take a nap. it's summer break already, isn't it? >.< too bad i don't have that same luxury.

[lovelyjae]

Who the hell is this adult Jaejoong? His identity is driving me mad.. What are the secrets he is holding? What is the thing that can't do? Does he know of the dead Jaejoong, or is he being controlled by the dead Jaejoong even? Or maybe dead's Jaejoong's mother wants him to take revenge for her dead son? She must have grieved extensively..

The opening scene with Yoochun found drowning is so intense. My heart was racing so fast and I didn't even realise i was holding my breathe until Yoochun coughs. I wonder too, how parents survive being parents.

I guess a happy ending in this story is too much to ask eh?

[coconutjack]

Haha! i was expecting someone to be impatient with the mystery that is jaejoong. he really is taking too long to reveal who he is. here's to limit your questioning: he told yunho once that he didn't exist. that doesn't necessarily mean he's a ghost. but what is he then? ^^

i had my heart caught in my throat writing that scene. keke~ really if i were a parent i think i'd go mad knowing all the dangers my kid can get into.

as for the last part of your comment: yes, i do think a happy ending is a long shot.

[irerd_taga]

Yoochun's safe and sound now, but for how long. I'm sure ghostboy!Jae won't stop until he reaches his objective.
And Jae's planning to disappear from Yunho's life just as he appeared in it, mysteriously.
From the last paragraph, it seems to me that ghostboy!Jae and adult Jae were twins. As for the other clues, they're at the tip of my brain cells but still can't figure them out!

[coconutjack]

well you're right for the first part. ghostboy!jae is pretty relentless. for the second...i guess you can say that as well. as for the third...hehe. not saying. ^^