APTF [9/13]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Prayer Time Forgot
Length: Chaptered [9/13]
Rating: NC17 now, to be safe.
Genre: Umm. Unsure. Angst, supernatural, generally. Weirdness. We'll see.
Pairing: Yes, there are pairings. (Gasp! A first!) I'm guessing it's YunJae.
Summary: Something inside of him is cracking like an eggshell being pitted against ceramic and he wonders just how

Comments

[kahel_luna]

i don't even wanna try to analyze what jaejoong is but it's sad that it has come to the part where has decided he is going to move on (although painfully) along whatever path he is taking without Yunho (and Yoochun).

Everything's going to be real painful, I feel it.

[coconutjack]

hate to say you're right but you most definately are 99.9% (as of now).

[kahel_luna]

this time around, i hate being right T_T

[kattan69]

I agree with chloe1910 on her observations. Both Jaes are twins. Jae's mom is a bit crazy over the loss of the other one and blame Yunho and his family - mostly probably wants to take revenge. But Jae couldn't do it and that's why he is leaving them. About the ghost...I don't think Jae knows of it....but the ghost also wants to take revenge.

This is getting excited. Can't wait for your next update!

[coconutjack]

^^ glad you're still with me. we'll see what happens, eh? i can't give anything away. ^^;;

[crimeis]

i'm assuming jaejoong was hired by the mother to appear in yunho's life? or maybe jaejoong doesn't have an identity? aish, i'm all jumbled up dear. but this chapter was intense. or maybe he's like a lost soul, wanted just one wish to take care of yoochun and yunho? kay, i should shutup now. :DDD haha, definitely a wonderful chapter dear. anticipate for more. ♥♥;;

[coconutjack]

you're nearly right that jaejoong doesn't have an identity, but that's about all i can give away. keke~! you're always loads of <333 dear. ^^

[evaleva]

oh my god, this chapter just broke my heart. i felt like i was holding my breath throughout, and the last scene, oh. ♥ gorgeous writing, as always. i can't wait for the next part!

[coconutjack]

thanks, dearie. ♥ it's actually killing me to write such depressed characters, but i'm better at it than comedy or fluff. haha. i'm afraid to say you'll have to endure more of it.

[d1104]

yyyyyyyyyyeeaaaaaaaayyyyyyy for yoochun is alive!!!*thanks for paper bag*lol and i got a little confused by all the analysing and observations but now i got the concept for the next chapter!!!!!

[coconutjack]

have you? i'm glad. ^^ i think nothing is going to be what everyone's expecting though. ;D thanks for reading and commenting! <3

(kiss from 6-year-old yoochun)