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coconutjack

A Boy and the Sea [2/?]

Jun 09, 2008 19:56

Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Two.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: He's never known a minute to last for so long.

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Two

Their father says nothing at first when they reappear at the cabin, and his expression doesn’t even change despite ( Read more... )

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thevirginia June 9 2008, 12:09:35 UTC

i LOVE the playful nature you've captured -- they're actually boys, not just giggling little things. i can't wait to see what changmin's role in this whole thing is :D~

coconutjack June 9 2008, 13:05:39 UTC

what min is will be revealed next chapter. to be released...uh...at an indefinite date. XD

i love playful!ho and chun too. they're so much love. <333

kurogoma June 9 2008, 12:55:37 UTC

cityfolk sure do find friendliness from strangers disconcerting.

btw, i was wondering, does the father have a name?

coconutjack June 9 2008, 13:08:27 UTC

i think it's jae's personality too that's working. i don't think he's a very sociable boy.

i was wondering the same thing. probably. if it fits.

rshauna June 9 2008, 13:14:28 UTC

aww junsu is adorable. cute story so far :)

coconutjack June 10 2008, 00:26:59 UTC

su is adorable at whatever age, i think. haha. thanks very much! <333

lovelyjae June 9 2008, 13:24:35 UTC

Are you sure you'd be slow? I'm not complaining though.. Really I'm not ( ... )

coconutjack June 10 2008, 00:38:04 UTC

lol, i knew you'd react. well, this is going to be the last in a while. i think. depends on how much free time i'll be able to get in the day. it's busy these days. busybusybusy

i worried there might be a grudge too, but jae and yoona naturally melded well with junsu. i don't think anyone would be able to resist a baby!su anyway. haha.

questions will be unanswered by the next chap, i think. changmin's anyway. (heroes, lol). or at least you'd be able to guess. ;D

clowns are right. yunchun are those pair of boys that often spell fun and/or trouble. ;D

thanks as alway, dear! <333

faricsyung June 9 2008, 14:42:08 UTC

Baby Junsu ~~~ I want to pinch his nose/cheeks and bring him around ~~~ SO CUTE!! <333333

I love the interactions between the characters!! Especially Jae and his father, and the cousins. There's some air of 'hey lookie we're men' in those. (Ohmy- Sad attempt at explanations, but yeah. ._.)

Oh Changmin. Something's up with you.. Not a ghost, but a presence? Play of words? I shall wait for more hints. xDD

I like this AU. I have no problem imagining it's real. Thanks for this. ;DD <3

coconutjack June 10 2008, 00:41:37 UTC

LOL. yunchun do have that air don't they? in this fic at least. what a couple of hams. XD

baby!su is loving all this attention, i assure you. XD

not a ghost nor a presence. hehehe. any more guesses?

i'm glad you like it! thanks very much love. <333

coconutjack June 10 2008, 00:42:22 UTC

damn, wrong tags. forgive me for that. XD

faricsyung June 10 2008, 01:33:28 UTC

LOL. No worries. I got you. xD <3

I'll guess more when you give more hints! =P

I think I told you before, but I like how you write interactions between men/boys. It hits at all the right spots. I can totally see my brothers/cousins in them. Also, fathers. I think they're the most underrated when it comes to love, because they can't really show/understand the love for their children openly like mothers do. ._.

I should stop spamming your page and just wait for your next update. LOL. <33

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