A Boy and the Sea [2/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Two.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: He's never known a minute to last for so long.

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Two

Their father says nothing at first when they reappear at the cabin, and his expression doesn’t even change despite

Comments

[applesu]

ksjdhfksj ♥ <-- is the sound of me dying from baby!junsu's cute. 8D i'm so happy to see an update already! the introduction of yunho + yoochun was lovely - such boys! waa, and your jaejoong voice is still beautiful. changmin...curious curious!!

:D ♥

[coconutjack]

i want to bite this su i've created. haha. even in my head he's too adorable. <333 and yunchun are such rowdy boys. haha. i'm very glad you like them. 8D

thanks very much for reading and reviewing, love. <333

[mickey8]

YunChun's appearance!!! and it's sucha nice...erm...encounter! ^^

so, JaeJoong is definitely a quiet one while ChangMin, the sneaky (and kinda airy -gone with the winde-) type. really...i don't want to think or guess or whatnot (but i'm guessing ChangMin is going to hunt JaeJoong)...ajldgkagfaogfda!~

JunSu... I FREAKING WANNA SQUISH HIM! so adorable. i can't stop awwwing. duh... so cute!

and i pity the dad. though nothing much was said but yeah...it must be hard. being him. aish... the memories of JaeJoong is just so bitter sweet. poor them.

again, very intriguing. ♥

[coconutjack]

yep, jae's the quiet one. yunchun is obviously noisy and playful. :D and changmin is...secret. 8D but not, min isn't going to hunt jae or anything. :)

su is teh love. he fits the 4yo part pretty well. haha.

jae's daddy IS having a hard time. his family's a mess. :/

[coke_pie221]

oh su's so adorable~
yay~ Jae met chunnie and yunho!
i'm really wondering what part min plays in all of this..
can't w8 for more~

[coconutjack]

su is v. adorable. 8D jaechunho are probably going to be trouble. like the boys they are. 8D

min is enjoying all this intrigue.

thank you for reading and reviewing, love! <333

[314159]

Ahh, finally got a chance to read this! This is......... so cute, it's killing me. Baby Junsu ;____; I want one!! He is the sweetest little thing. I feel so sad for their father, it must be hard getting the cold treatment from your kids ;; at least he as baby!Su. I wonder why Changmin keeps disappearing. Is he really 93 or was he joking? D: *gullible??* Also, YAYY for Yunho and Yoochun, they're so funny. You write them all so well, they're so playful and boyish. ♥ More soon pls :D

[coconutjack]

hello again, dear! *waves* i'm surprised you haven't given up on me seeing as i broke your heart with aptf. ;_; i'm glad you're here though! ^^

everyone, it seems, wants a baby su. haha. but his daddy needs him most now. ^^ and min is...well let's say he's been around. 8D ah, you'll be know by the next chapter. :D i was going to make yunchun twins actually since they actually fit the part, but they're fine as cousins. ^^

thanks as always, love! <333

p.s. i lurve your jae icon. haha.

[yuxo]

Goodness, you updated already? :O *glomps* =]

Gah. Gah gah gah. I don't know, the peanut butter sticks with me and it feels like there's a twig caught in my left ventricle. ;_; In normal people speech, it means that hurts. >_> *shot* XD I don't know, it's always the little things that matter the most, you know? Subtlety speaks the loudest.

Why does Changmin keep poofing away? :/ >_> I'm so curious. :O XD

Can't wait for next chapter~ ^_^ ♥

[coconutjack]

i couldn't help it. the second chapter had already been finished when i put up the first. :] hope you don't mind. ^^

lol, i like your figures of speech. they're very creative 8D "poofing away"...hahaha. lovely. lovely. you'll find out (or at least be able to guess) by next chapter.

thanks for reading and reviewing, dear <333