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coconutjack

A Boy and the Sea [2/?]

Jun 09, 2008 19:56

Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Two.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: He's never known a minute to last for so long.

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Two

Their father says nothing at first when they reappear at the cabin, and his expression doesn’t even change despite ( Read more... )

Comments 37

blackblood0688 June 10 2008, 04:23:54 UTC

Aw! I'm glad that Jae made some new friends! And Changmin~ Hm...I thought about it, and if he's not a ghost, then I'm guessing he's Jae's imaginary friend. Idk.

Great chapter! <3

coconutjack June 10 2008, 11:39:22 UTC

min could be...or he could be something even better 8D i didn't put in the genre on purpose. 8D

thanks, love! <333

evaleva June 10 2008, 07:34:45 UTC

oh yay, yunho and yoochun! they are all such boys, i love that you let that shine through in the midst of jae's family drama. and of course i'm dying to know about the ever mysterious changmin. XD love it! ♥

coconutjack June 10 2008, 11:41:06 UTC

jae's drama needs to be countered by some yunchun fun. XD 12yo jae is too serious for his own good. and min's going to come about soon. he doesn't like being in the wings so much.

thanks very much, dear <333

milollita June 10 2008, 16:02:36 UTC

I don't know whether I should be tired of seeing you post or wait until I shit in my pants from anticipation for the next chapter T_T

Again, another completely different AU and gosh, young!Jae seems so bitter. It seems as if the rest of the "Dong Bang" boys are like sunshine and he's a black cloud in the middle of clear summer day Dx

I demand the next chapter! >.

coconutjack June 13 2008, 09:56:25 UTC

updating soooon! XD sorry, i've been so busy lately. T_T

good metaphor: sunshine and balck cloud. yes, that's exactly what he is. ;D

boojaesubabe June 11 2008, 05:28:46 UTC

I absolutely adore your characterization. And the way the father is trying, and Jae knows that his dad is trying...but they can't seem to meet each other halfway, it's really bittersweet. Yunho and Yoochun...boys will be boys lol...and just what Jae needs I think. And I really like how Changmin is so elusive...I know it's killing your other readers...but I think it would be wonderful if you can drag that on a bit more in away...no need to rush why Changmin always disappears. It's almost like he's a figment of Jae's imagination. Looking forward to your next update!

coconutjack June 13 2008, 09:59:45 UTC

I know it's killing your other readers...but I think it would be wonderful if you can drag that on a bit more in away...no need to rush why Changmin always disappears.
-- i thought about dragging it on too but i gave out so many clues via the comments already that i don't think he'll be as mysterious the next chapter. XD although he will still be pretty elusive. lol. changmin's identity is only one part of the story anyway. :)

you were right about a lot of things in your comment (dad+jae, yunchun+jae)! haha. thanks very much, love! <3

err_rainjung June 11 2008, 06:49:34 UTC

I LOVE peanut butter on my pancakes. =]
Yumm.

=]

I love the entrance of YunChun. They are adorable...but not like Junsu. I can't wait for the next update.

Changmin...is a suspicious character. It makes me think of APTF, which made me cry my eyes out.

coconutjack June 13 2008, 10:01:12 UTC

jae loves em. well...he used too. D:

of course 4yos are more adorable than 12yos. :] i want a 4yo su now, actually. haha.

re:aptf
I'M SORRY! :[