A Boy and the Sea [2/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Two.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: He's never known a minute to last for so long.

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Two

Their father says nothing at first when they reappear at the cabin, and his expression doesn’t even change despite

Comments

[azurehook]

“Thanks, Dad,” he says, forcing a smile, not having the heart to tell his father that he doesn’t eat peanut butter anymore. oh man, this line...

Gosh, the interactions with Jaejoong and Yoona and his dad. and Junsu, who doesn't know. I can just see the cracks and kinks in the relationship, where nothing's really wrong per se, but nothing's quite right. Like they're slowly drifting apart and the vacation is supposed to bring them together.

(funny, reminds me sometimes of my family and our times at vacation...)

LOVE IT.

and why does Changmin keep disappearing? *intrigued*

[shinchul303]

"His hand touches Jaejoong’s arm for the briefest of moments, and his skin is cool and smooth against Jaejoong’s, like a stone kept underwater."

Absolutely beautiful.

And scary.

[wanderingreen]

I love the whole feel of the fic...and the situation between jaejoong and his father and the past. The way you describe alot of things is so subtle &hearts&hearts

Hmm and what exactly is Changmin? *thinks hard*

This is a story I'd actually read even if the characters weren't dongbang boys ^^

I think I have to go check out your other stories now =D