A Boy and the Sea [3/?]

[coconutjack]

Title: A Boy and the Sea
Chaptered: Yes. This is Chapter Three.
Rating and Everything Else: G-ish; Jae-centric; no pairings but everyone will be in it (aye, they'll be kids)
Summary: "Seaweed and fish guts on rye."

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Three

Yunho and Yoochun, Jaejoong soon discovers, are talkers, and it takes their speaking engines very little time and effort before

Comments

[thevirginia]

oolala! i'm still loving the interaction, the real boyishness of this whole thing (thunder and lightning, yes! hahaa). jae's family issues are quite said, poor bb. and now you've got me thinking changmin is a merman (merboy 8D) or something. can't wait to see the next update :D

[coconutjack]

gosh that was fast! (not that i'm complaining though. :D)

yeah 'thunder and lighting' was the best thing i could come up with at that time. haha. it does fit them though. XD lol. what noisy boys.

lol at 'merboy'. (i don't think i can imagine min with a tail instead of those long gorgeous legs. ahaha). close. close. XD

[thevirginia]

fkshdjfs those legs ;; curiousityyyyyy! :D i'm loving it, hahaha.

[kurogoma]

i still feel really bad for the dad, but the yunchun are such dorks. they seemed like such fun-spirited people and to jaejoong, their family must be such a contrast to his own.

and now you have also got me thinking that changmin may just be an ethereal being.... :D

[coconutjack]

yunchun's dorkiness does rub salt in jae's wound. they're from totally different worlds. ^^ *pets jae*

and HOHO! changmin just might be one. :D maybe. we'll see.

[yuxo]

Aw, omfg. I sighed out LOUD during the part Yunho totally fails with his sandwich and almost cooed at the computer screen, lmao. ;_________;

This is so lovely, I love it. ...Yes, that was meant to be redundant. =_=;;

I can't WAIT to see what happens with Changmin, omfg. I want this to be Jaemin now, even if they are only kids. Lmao. I'll be waiting for the next chapter~ ^3^ ♥

[coconutjack]

fail!ho is the sweetest, especially if h's 12yo and still has those wonky teeth. haha awwwwwww

i love your redundance. one can never say one thing enough. ^^

i'm starting to notice the jaemin-ish tendencies too. rofl. sheesh. ^0^
<333

[mickey8]

kjdfgaosifgasf! ChangMin is a merman!!!? the prince of the sea or that sort?!

omg, how does your mind works? really?!!!

though nothing has been said but i'm gonna place heavy bet on this guess.

i'm really liking how things go thus far. it's totally new. the ruckus YunChun created with the inner battle JaeJoong's facing...everything is just giving out this 'rubber' effect. you stretch and let loose...you'll never know how far it can go. it's very interesting.

♥

[coconutjack]

kjdfgaosifgasf! ChangMin is a merman!!!? the prince of the sea or that sort?!
-- ^0^ i'm not telling~~

i like how you phrased that: rubber effect. really good! ^^

*showers you with caboodles of love*
<333

[azurehook]

HOMG HOMG!! It's Buzzard's Bay and Massachusetts and ahhh!!! When I first started, I immediately thought of Providence, RI and New England and wow... that's GREAT! (sorry, I'm a little excited. I grew up in MA most of my life and we go to the Cape every summer... so uh yeah, this hits pretty damn close).

*ahem*

oh ho, so Changmin's a sea person/selkie type? ^^ this is sounding so good. and Yunho and Yoochun LOL. They're GREAT. Though I can see it might get hard for Jaejoong sometimes with Yunho's mom...

You don't even know (well, except for the Min part) how much this reminds me of my family and vacations. But then again, I think it just goes to show how well you capture a family, their dynamic that it's relate-able, understandable... the dad who can't communicate or doesn't know quite how to fix things and the oldest daughter who wants to be independent...

I'm not sure how coherent I'm being here. But I love it, oh so much! <33333333

[coconutjack]

rofl, oh my, the pressure is mounting. XD well, i have to put up some sort of disclaimer: most of my knowledge about MA and the bay will probably be half-invented and half-salvaged from other accounts. i've a fetish for new england even though i've never been. my family isn't fond of taking trips to those types of places; they prefer shopping. =.=;; but we HAVE gone to the beach several times and most of what will happen to jae and the boys (sans changmin) are going to be derived from that experience. lol.

re:min
HEHE. yunchun is a handful though. they're like twin dynamites. haha.

i'm glad you like it! <333

[azurehook]

^_^ no worries~ it's your own AU, remix version. I was curious about how you picked New England, since in your profile it said your location was Seoul. New England fetish, that's new for me~ It definitely has its own culture and tradition. You should go if you have a chance! (though winters can be wicked cold) aww~~well, you still have some experiences to work off of :D haha, it seems Min is from another place entirely so (what exactly is he?? so curious! can't wait for more XD).

LOL, so true. I can't imagine handling them as kids, they'd be a handful. and so cute!!

loving your work so, so much.

[coconutjack]

lol at "remix version". XD yeah, something like that, huh?

i WOULD go! WILL go. i don't know why i'm so fond of it. probably all those storybooks i had when i was a kid. i was sort of a jfk fan then too. so...i dunno. *cough*weirdo*cough*

min is totally different, i can assure you. :)

thanks very much, dear <333