Comments | coeurdesoleil: Fic. I wrote it.

coeurdesoleil

Fic. I wrote it.

Dec 04, 2011 21:57

Ok, I am just gonna post this before I lose my nerve. I know there are many many problems with it, but it is the only fic I have ever written (and most likely the only one I'll ever write), so here goes...
Be kind, but be honest.

Title: It is so quite a new thing
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Esca/Marcus
Notes: Originally written for poziomeczka back in September. ( Read more... )

oh god oh god oh god, fic, the eagle, esca/marcus

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lallyloo December 4 2011, 21:04:58 UTC

OMG. I HAVEN'T EVEN READ THIS YET AND I AM SOO EXCITED. <3

lallyloo December 4 2011, 21:35:13 UTC

BB! THIS IS WONDERFUL! It's so sweet and hot, and oh god the pining! I love pining!Marcus and I love that Esca notices and gives Marcus what he wants (and of course, Esca wants it too!) And aww, Esca saying his name and Marcus finally breaking.. and hnnnngh the sex.. so hot.

Also, this?

Slowly, slowly, Marcus runs a finger down the helix of Esca's left ear, another finger simultaneously sliding down the smaller man's cheek.

I love the detail of Marcus's finger on his cheek as well... Sooo incredibly sweet. ♥♥♥

I had a ridiculous smile on my face the entire time I was reading, and I'm glad you posted this! :D

(and omg e.e. cummings <333 and also, THANK YOU!)

coeurdesoleil December 5 2011, 18:52:04 UTC

EEEE I AM SO SO SO HAPPY THAT YOU LIKED IT!!!
I was horribly nervous about finally posting this and my hands were shaking as I hit "post entry", but I am proud that I didn't chicken out.

I have the most ridiculous smile on my face right now after rereading your comment ♥ ♥ ♥

(e.e. cummings is MY FAVOURITE. And I WOULD WRITE YOU FIC ALL THE TIME IF I COULD).

tracionn December 4 2011, 21:17:50 UTC

You wrote a fic! 'Course you had to post it!

You know I'm not too familiar with the fandom but thanx to Amanda who posted the link I could see the movie and I totally understand what the fandom sees in them.
Aaaanyway, back to your fic - It's lovely! And I personally like the way it's written a lot; you have in between here and there these very short sentences and they are like a bolt and the effect is wonderfully intense. Greatly done!

And ears! I mean, EARS! Who could resist that?

My favourite moment is this one:
"Marcus", he says. And that is all it takes.
*squeeeeee* My fandom or not, this is definitely very very squeeeable :)

No need to worry, dear, it's lovely!

awarrington December 4 2011, 22:19:48 UTC

Haha! I sent you the link to the Eagle movie in the hopes of 'turning' you and while I didn't manage it, I'm glad it allowed you to appreciate this wonderful story. :)

tracionn December 5 2011, 08:04:14 UTC

I guessed that might have been one of your intentions ;)
And I'm so sorry. As I said, I completetly see the slash which is really out in the open and I like their last lines a lot - they just didn't reach my heart for some reasons. Maybe because I'm not attracted to either of them? I can't tell.
But then, two obesessions - well, if you count Ramin make that three - is really all I can handle :)

But yep, this ficlet here was very enjoyable!

coeurdesoleil December 5 2011, 18:56:12 UTC

Thank you so much for reading and leaving such wonderful feedback, darling! I really appreciate it, especially since I know this is not really your fandom ♥

I JUST REALLY LOVE HIS EARS. And lol I guess I've had a love affair with ear!porn ever since I first got into Trek fandom :)

*huggles*

Also, I have been meaning to read your Brokeback fic, but I have been busy at work and busy preparing for Christmas the last couple of weeks, so I haven't gotten around to it yet. I did manage to send off your holiday card tonight though!

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tracy7307 December 4 2011, 22:05:03 UTC

BB. OH SHIT. You should write, and write OFTEN! This is incredibly hot and god do I love pining!Marcus. Also, your title coming from e.e. cummings! I also used an e.e. cummings poem line for one of my fics, LOL! An Arthur/Merlin fic I wrote a few months ago. I adore cummings! Great choice for your title. And DAMN what an ode to Esca's ears. Your writing is sensual and gorgeous - I felt like it was me perving on Esca's ears! And of course the whole thing was SMOKING hot! My toes were curled, bb.

This is fantastic, and I hope you continue to write. Well-done, and THANK YOU SO MUCH! *HUGS* ♥

coeurdesoleil December 5 2011, 19:03:46 UTC

e.e. cummings is my favourite poet! he speaks to me like no other poet does.
everyone should use his lines in fics!!!

I AM SO SO THRILLED THAT YOU LIKED IT. You and lally are among my favourite writers (and favourite people ♥) in this fandom, so it really means a lot to me that you enjoyed my little fic.

I doubt I will be writing (much) more though; I just don't seem to have this drive to write the way most of you writers do.

*hugs you tight*

tracy7307 December 6 2011, 01:19:27 UTC

MINE TOO. God, I adore his poems. ADORE. Mine was called "whatever a moon has always meant", from the poem anyone lived in a pretty how town. ADORE I TELL YOU. HEARTS IN MY EYES.

I DID LOVE YOUR LITTLE FIC ♥ THANK YOU FOR THINKING OF US and aww ♥ YOU ARE TOO KIND.

*HUGS*

coeurdesoleil December 6 2011, 13:40:40 UTC

OMG I AM RIGHT THERE WITH YOU. "I carry your heart with me (i carry it in my heart" is one of my favourite poems EVER and eeee i actually named my tumblr after a line in "anyone lived in a pretty how town" (sun moon stars rain)!! :DDDD

<3333333333333333333

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poziomeczka December 4 2011, 22:13:10 UTC

HOLY FUCKING SHITE!!!! BUGGERING BLUE BARNACLES!!!
YOU'VE POSTED THIS. YESSSSS YESSSSSS SO GOOOD.
STILL SO GOOD. ALSO EARPORN. ALWAYS A PLUS IN MY BOOKS.

coeurdesoleil December 5 2011, 19:06:56 UTC

:DDDDD

I AM GLAD THAT YOU LIKE IT. I HAVE HAD THIS HORRIBLE FEELING EVER SINCE I FIRST SHOWED IT TO YOU THAT YOU DIDN'T LIKE IT MUCH :/ I guess I should stop doubting everything all the time.

poziomeczka December 5 2011, 20:30:06 UTC

DUDE YES. YOU HAVE TO LEARN NOT TO DOUBT!!
FOR IT IS GLORIOUS.
also I hope you won't mind if I rec the shit out of it, right? I know it was written for me, but like I think EVERYONE DESERVES TO KNOW ABOUT THE EAR-PORN.

coeurdesoleil December 5 2011, 21:30:26 UTC

OKAY. SOON. MAYBE.
i don't mind. just please don't feel like you are obliged to or anything, ok?

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awarrington December 4 2011, 22:17:07 UTC

I'm so glad you decided to post this! :)

I love how the focus of Marcus' attraction for Esca is his ears - few writers have had Marcus acknowledge the way Esca's ears stick out. And seriously, this is so hot. I have long had a bit of an ear kink, so this really hit my buttons! The sex when it comes is sensual and intimate, Esca gently offering himself, offering what he knows Marcus wants. Beautiful. :)

Thank you so much for sharing this. ♥

coeurdesoleil December 5 2011, 19:13:40 UTC

I am really glad I decided to post it too. I've gotten so much lovely feedback, and I know I need to push myself out of my comfort zone more - and this was way out of my comfort zone (I almost hurled after posting it and my hands would not stop shaking)!

Thank you so so so much for all your encouragement and for pushing me to challenge myself and try writing in the first place, and for all the wonderful feedback. You are one of my favourite writers so praise from you means a lot.

♥ ♥ ♥