Fic. I wrote it.

Dec 04, 2011 21:57

Ok, I am just gonna post this before I lose my nerve. I know there are many many problems with it, but it is the only fic I have ever written (and most likely the only one I'll ever write), so here goes...
Be kind, but be honest.

Title: It is so quite a new thing
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Esca/Marcus
Notes: Originally written for poziomeczka back in September. ( Read more... )

oh god oh god oh god, fic, the eagle, esca/marcus

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ladytiferet December 10 2011, 04:54:04 UTC
It's a beautiful, sensual, hot story, I loved it :)

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coeurdesoleil December 10 2011, 14:27:42 UTC
Thank you! I am so pleased that you enjoyed it.

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aeroport_art December 10 2011, 06:07:21 UTC
OMG, what loveliness. The ear-porn was hot, yes, but what really turned my crank was how adorably obsessive Marcus was about them. I can always get behind a fic where Marcus is pining after Esca and consumed with shame because of it! <3

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coeurdesoleil December 10 2011, 14:30:33 UTC
Thank you so much for this lovely comment! I'm a big fan of pining!ashamed!Marcus too, so I had fun writing him :)

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stjohn_rivers December 10 2011, 06:42:01 UTC
WICKEDNESS AND IMMORALITY. SHAME.

AS A REVEREND I ABSOLUTELY DISAPPROVE OF THIS SORT OF THING.

YES.

IF THE GOOD LORD HAD WISHED US TO READ EAR PORN, HE WOULD HAVE MADE EARS MORE FUCKABLE.

WHAT ARE YOU SAYING ABOUT MY EARS.

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coeurdesoleil December 10 2011, 14:35:20 UTC
OMG MY DEAR DEAR REVEREND! I DID NOT REALIZE YOU WERE STILL ALIVE AND KICKING, AND OH MY YOU ARE STILL LOOKING GOOD! - TELL ME YOUR SECRET: HAVE YOU DISCOVERED THE FOUNTAIN OF YOUTH??

IF THE GOOD LORD HAD NOT WISHED ME TO WRITE EAR PORN HE WOULD HAVE STRUCK ME DOWN BEFORE I HAD TIME TO PUBLISH IT.

I LOVE YOUR EARS. I AM SURE CAPTAIN AQUILA DOES TOO. PLEASE GIVE HIM MY REGARDS.

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stjohn_rivers December 10 2011, 17:46:38 UTC
THE FOUNTAIN OF YOUTH TURNS OUT TO BE FORNICATION. I HAD NOT ANTICIPATED THAT.

ALSO, IT IS TRUE; YOU WERE NOT STRUCK DOWN DURING THE WRITING OF YOUR EAR PORN. I BOW TO YOUR LOGIC.

HOW DID YOU KNOW HE LIKES ME EARS? O GOD. WHAT DID HE SAY.

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coeurdesoleil December 11 2011, 00:13:58 UTC
WHAT A DELIGHTFUL SIDE-EFFECT OF FREQUENT FORNICATION.

INDEED THE GOOD LORD HAS BESTOWED HIS APPROVAL UPON US. BY EXTENSION THIS CLEARLY MEANS THAT THE LORD APPROVES OF ALL KINDS OF PORN.

HE WOULD NOT SHUT UP ABOUT THEM.

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demon_rum December 10 2011, 06:43:55 UTC
I do not disapprove! I think that was just marvellous, in every possible way. EAR PORN. YOU HAVE WRITTEN IT.

Well done on making JB's ears even more sexy than they already are.

YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE.

ps: just checked the mail. Chocolate from Norway!

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coeurdesoleil December 10 2011, 14:39:31 UTC
INDEED I HAVE. I WISH MORE PEOPLE WOULD WRITE EAR PORN AS WELL BECAUSE THOSE EARS ARE JUST BEGGING TO BE LICKED AND SUCKED AND NIBBLED AT IN FIC.

I am not sure I will ever write anything else, but thank you for your kind support!

Oooo! Both the Norwegian and the American postal services are being surprisingly efficient this year. Hope you like it!

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demon_rum December 10 2011, 18:30:23 UTC
i was shocked at how fast it got to me! I am not exactly close to you :D

ha, I hope you write more at some point! I know, things are always busy, but you've got an excellent style, and it was a charming, adorable, SEXY story. And I especially like how Esca ends up, as usual, taking charge of the situation and totally catching Marcus off guard. I could totally picture the look on Marcus' face when Esca says "do you want to touch my ears?" Sort of happy, and surprised, and a bit of just-been-punched-between-the-eyes.

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coeurdesoleil December 11 2011, 00:19:48 UTC
THE PROMPT DELIVERY OF MY CARD HAS MADE ME FEEL LIKE YOU ARE NOT ALL THAT FAR AWAY AFTER ALL.

heh, we'll see. it's not just that things are busy, even if that certainly is a factor, it's more that i don't really have that urge to write that most fan writers seem to have. i honestly feel like i would be perfectly content to never ever write fic again. i might change my mind of course, and if the mood strikes me i would absolutely consider writing more, it's just.. idk i think i would be just as happy sticking to daydreaming and making up stories and scenarios in my head without putting words down on paper, and it is my understanding that most fic writers feel more motivated to write and to express themselves than i do. idk idk.

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scraplove December 26 2011, 18:59:48 UTC
<3 You're wonderful, bb. I love Esca's quiet confidence, since I think that's basically my favorite character trait of his in the book.

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coeurdesoleil December 26 2011, 22:19:16 UTC
Thank you! It means so much to me that you liked it! Esca's confidence is one of the things I like best about him too :)

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