Comments | coeurdesoleil: Fic. I wrote it.

coeurdesoleil

Fic. I wrote it.

Dec 04, 2011 21:57

Ok, I am just gonna post this before I lose my nerve. I know there are many many problems with it, but it is the only fic I have ever written (and most likely the only one I'll ever write), so here goes...
Be kind, but be honest.

Title: It is so quite a new thing
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Esca/Marcus
Notes: Originally written for poziomeczka back in September. ( Read more... )

oh god oh god oh god, fic, the eagle, esca/marcus

Comments 70

daphnie_1 December 5 2011, 20:37:00 UTC

Not my fandom, as you know, but this is seriously epic <3 Very, very, impressive fic!

coeurdesoleil December 5 2011, 21:45:55 UTC

Oh sweetie, I am incredibly touched and honoured that you read my story despite not even being in the Eagle fandom.
♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

(How are you? Hope everything is going well with you!)

daphnie_1 December 6 2011, 14:23:10 UTC

Of course I read it! How could I not! And now you've made me want to go and seek out the film, especially if the fic for it is this good! <3

(and Im good! Thank you! Working away, keeping busy. Currently writing Avengers fic as we speak and getting my ass kicked by the fact Steve is *tough* to write! <3)

coeurdesoleil December 6 2011, 14:32:01 UTC

<3333
The film has many weaknesses but I love it dearly. If you do decide to watch it, I really hope you will enjoy it. (There is a lot of truly excellent fic in this fandom - some of it far better than the film itself.)

(Yay glad to hear it. I have been really busy work-wise lately too. Oooo Avengers fic! I have so far only read one Steve/Tony fic (but I enjoyed it a lot) and am now slowly working my way through Avengers-related films (have seen Thor and Captain America, have yet to watch all of the Iron Man films as well as The Hulk))

(The comment has been removed)

coeurdesoleil December 5 2011, 23:15:29 UTC

THANK YOU. There should be more ear porn. Lots more. I never expected to get so much lovely feedback on this, and I am thrilled that you liked my story!

lulahbelle December 5 2011, 23:03:15 UTC

You made ear fetish sexxy, but like how?? God its so slow and languid and heavy with atmosphere and yeah did I say sexy? Cos it sure is hella sexy.

coeurdesoleil December 5 2011, 23:18:09 UTC

:DDDDD
Ear fetish is totally sexy, omg I have crazy love for JBells' silly jug ears.
So glad you enjoyed it!

♥

riventhorn December 6 2011, 16:13:49 UTC

Lovely, lovely! I love how it's such a detailed exploration of exactly what Marcus wants that takes you right into his mind. Mmmmm, and such a hot finish! I love the last line, too. Awwww, we don't blame you, Marcus! :)

coeurdesoleil December 6 2011, 19:53:54 UTC

Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment! I am so glad that you enjoyed this!

If I were Marcus I would lick and suck and bite at Esca's ears ALL. THE. TIME. :)

jaylee_g December 7 2011, 08:39:55 UTC

So I still haven't seen "The Eagle" as I've mentioned to you before, but I couldn't wait to read this, and so I decided to go ahead and do so without that background. :D

This was wonderful, my dear. If I didn't know better, and you hadn't said, I would have a hard time believing this was your first foray into writing. I loved your play with language, it was positively poetic, for example "pain streaking through it like a venomous bite".

The story was also extremely erotic. The attraction palpable and electrifying.

I hope you write more, you have a true gift for it. :)

coeurdesoleil December 7 2011, 19:36:35 UTC

Oh gosh, I nearly teared up when I saw your comment! Thank you so so much! I can't believe you read this even if you haven't even seen the movie! I am overjoyed that you liked my story!

I'm not sure I will ever write another story, I don't really have that drive to write that most fanwriters seem to have, but at the same time I would love to write at least one story in Trek fandom at some point. We'll see, maybe inspiration will strike one day :)

♥