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May 04, 2004 23:59

What lies beyond this mask
Is merely a question I always ask.
Painted with stripes of green and red,
Revealing envy, tears I shed;
Displaying my broken heart
Dark and gloomy, inches apart;
And trickles of bliss that I once had;
This morbid mask portrays my face;
Displaying my life in many ways.
The choice is yours to pick which view
To look at me and see me ( Read more... )

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1onelinedrawing May 5 2004, 05:36:05 UTC

Hello me.. I loverd me.. haha.. its been quite a "busty" week.. haha again...i wish to see everyone this weekend, but again its not possible, *tears*..... my friend alex and i are determined that we are going to walk to batesville and live on the side of the road ina large box,and he will get his lip pierced cause he wnats to? and we will go to shows/concerts(duh!) together, and we will live happily ever after in our box on the side of the road and survive by visiting my many friends in that area.... although alot are moving to the conway/little rock area.. blah no good... i cant fix it dern it... I love me!

coffee_for_two May 5 2004, 17:57:10 UTC

I loverd me too! And ive been much less busty the past few days now that schools finished. YAY! The box thing sounds like fun, can I come too! If you live in a box in bville then I will gladly drive you to conway with me on occasion...problem solved, now you two get to walkin...hehe....toodles me!

Well, I guess... I could say... nerpherder May 5 2004, 09:06:16 UTC

sorry for not calling you the other night. It wasn't anything personal I know I can come to you with anything and I will take you up on that even if it is three o'clock in the morning.

On to the Poem. A poem is a written expression of our personal feelings, to judge one by another is an insult to both writers. I also believe you are the only true judge of your writing, so what do you think of this one?

Two Cents: I like it

Love ya
Nerp

Re: Well, I guess... I could say... coffee_for_two May 5 2004, 17:54:44 UTC

Well I would say as an expression of my feelings at the time its perfect, but I dont believe the poem is all that great as compared to other writers, ya know. But its me. Toodles.

1onelinedrawing May 6 2004, 15:34:11 UTC

Hey ME!....
Hope everything goes as planned, itd be super fun......hehe... I LOVERD ME! and dont have a too busty day!