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[coffee_for_two]

So heres  a poem i worked on about a month ago...and i came back to it and changed some things up. Let me know which one you like better, or if either, or neither. Lovies.

Ache

As I stop and sit I let all the painful memories run through me
As I feel the tears run down my face, I begin to cry
I feel the pain scorching through me, burning like fire
I

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[coffee_for_two]

sorry its realization...oopsie

Awesome!

[michael84]

Awesome Joelle! I love these two! Oh, and the last part, ..."Poetry is not a code to be broken but a way of seeing with the eyes shut" so very true. I have never thought of it that way! I Love you so much!
Michael