'crack in the ceiling' - [Uruha/Kai, etc] 2/?

[colberry]

Title: crack in the ceiling
Chapter:  2/?
Description: In which Kai promises him as he watches his eyes bleed into silver, “You were happy once.”
Pairings: Kai/Uruha, Aoi/Ruki, Reita/Ruki
Genre: Drama, romance, supernatural
Notes:  For uruai's KU Summer Challenge :D

Comments

[liedxxx]

Takanori hummed, opening the front cover to scribble something across the neat lines. The light scratches of his pencil filled the calm air of the office for a spell.

OH MY GOD HOW DO YOU MAKE SOMETHING AS SIMPLE AS WRITING BEAUTIFUL. /CRIES LOUDLY

Oh yeah, by the by, I have two of me in here and one of them is sorta cheating on you. Are you going to have the fish or the chicken?’”

I BLAME YOU FOR THE MILK TEA ALL OVER MY KEYBOARD. (but now I understand what's going on, so it's all good.)

Oh my, I feel very bad for Kai. And Ruki/ Takanori. Reita too. LOL FUCK. I love the broken and lost two sides of Takanori/Ruki. I just adore the way you're able to convey the desperate feelings of all three characters differently.

“Just let me be a part - one small part - of your forever.”
/screams./ T_T
I can't wait for your next update. Hopefully it'll clear some confusion~

-gives you cookies-

[colberry]

Ahhhh, thank you so much! I'm so happy you enjoyed this chapter! :DD

No one is being spared from pain in this fic, it seems xD But maybe there will still be a semblance of a happy ending? We'll have to see :D

♥
-noms cookies-

[eilonwe2]

well, I didn't read the first part and though it's kind of confusing, I get that it's supposed to be confusing. still, good job.

[colberry]

Oh, thank you! :D I'm glad you enjoyed it, but yeah I definitely recommend reading the chapters in order - this fic is bound to get even more befuddling if you don't xDD

[sarky_chepooka]

I don't think I've EVER loved a story so much after reading only two chapters as I do this - not fan fiction, not "real" fiction by published authors, nothing. This was so intense that I literally had to take breaks while reading it. Also because I didn't want the chapter to end

[colberry]

Oh.. Oh, thank you so much! You've really left me speechless - your words really mean so much to me, especially since I've been feeling insecure about this fic (since it's supernatural and all). Really, thank you so much. I'm so, so glad you're enjoying it so far!

I've always found the concept of 'real' versus 'persona' in the GazettE very interesting. I would love to write more fics delving into that idea :D Haha, yes it's a very messy triangle of lust between those three (or is it four, with Ruki? >:3). I'm not sure who ends up with who at this point so we'll just have to see~

And it's not ridiculous at all! I really appreciate all the kind words you send me ;u; You're way too kind ♥

[puss_nd_boots]

This is freaking AMAZING, So vividly drawn and harrowing - you're not quite sure what's going on (is Ruki merely suffering from MPD, or is he posessed?) but you do know it's tearing him apart, and tearing apart everyone around him. Interesting how Kai seems to be at the center of the storm here, given his involvement with Ruki and inevitable involvement with Uruha (this is for an uruai challenge, after all!) it'll be interesting to see if hevis the key to everything that's happening in this fic.

[colberry]

GAH THANK YOU! This fic is kind of a clusterfuck in my head right now and I think that's starting to show in the chapters xD I'm so glad you're enjoying it so far (and yes, uruai shall make its glorious appearance soon-ish 8D) ♥

[colberry]

ASDFGHJK ♥