[Fic] All That I Am - 12/12

[coley_merrin]

Title: All That I Am
Author: Coley Merrin
Rating: R
Pairing: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
Genre: AU, Romance

Summary: To find a date that Kyuhyun can stomach is impossible - unless they hire one to pretend. But not even the perfect companion can stop years worth of threats, or keep their acting from becoming all too real.

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[chrysa]

spot!

[chrysa]

I'm on sleep deprivation set to delusional at this point so I can't leave you the review you deserve, but this chapter. ♥ ♥ ♥

Kyuhyun is really adorable in this chapter, so cute. I want to pinch his cheeks. Zhou Mi really does make a difference in his happiness.

“I think I’m in love,” Zhou Mi murmured in his ear.

“With who?” Kyuhyun asked, so deadpan that for a moment Zhou Mi actually seemed to think he was serious.

“Kyuhyun!” he exclaimed, pushing Kyuhyun and making him laugh.

“Oh, just him!” Kyuhyun wisecracked. “I guess that means I still have a chance.”

I especially love this, it's so adorable I want to squish him and his witty self. Just a small thing about grammar... I'm debating point this out because it's dialogue and people do say "with who" in speech, but technically it should be "with whom" since you can't use who after a preposition and... I'm going to shut up now.The last scene is just adorable and guh. Epilogue. Vacation? Sexy vacation? I kind of desperately want to see Kyuhyun throw another party, just for the

[coley_merrin]

It's okay... I'm set to delusional constantly. You are just fine~ I hope you get sleep though! :o

Mi helps Kyu remember how to live and not just work~ <3 Sigh~

Yes, the "with who"...it sounded so awkward as "whom"...so it ended up more colloquial, haha. I really appreciate you pointing it out, though! My grammar ain't perfect *wry* so there are times I totally veer off the beaten path and am glad to be pointed back to it. XD~ Would that all those mistakes were intentional. >.>;;; And yay for squishings, too~

Hehe~ Hopefully the epilogue lived up to it. XD Mi would probably be even more nervous for another party cause he knows he's the Real Thing now! Hehe. Too cute~~ <3

Thank you~! <3

[kyuhyunlover3]

SPOT.

[kyuhyunlover3]

/EXTREMELY SLOW READS. GAHHHHHHHHHH SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE~~~~ <33333333333333333333333333333 GAHHHH THEY'RE SOOOOO INTO EACH OTHER <3 /SQUEEEEEEEEEE CANT WAIT FOR THE EPILOGUE /TRIES TO WAIT PATIENTLY XD LOVE THIS SOOOO MUCH~~~~~

[coley_merrin]

<3<3 I'm so so glad you enjoyed it~~! <3 At least the epilogue came quicker~ <3

Thank you~! <3

[lil_aqua_chic]

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 *showers u with love*
This ending... is nothing short of making me burst in happiness! <3

[coley_merrin]

*gathers all the love I can* :D~~ <3<3

I'm so glad~~! <3<3

Thank you~! <3

[coley_merrin]

Epilogues \o/

They did finally work it out. <3 Mi was the knight in shining armor in so many ways. <3 Getting to go out together, be real together... Be real forever. XD <3<3 I'm so glad you enjoyed it! :)

Thank you~! <3

[coley_merrin]

All the little places that were important~ XD <3 lol...I do love that turtle statue. XD <3

Thank you~! <3