[Fic] All That I Am - 12/12

[coley_merrin]

Title: All That I Am
Author: Coley Merrin
Rating: R
Pairing: Zhou Mi/Kyuhyun
Genre: AU, Romance

Summary: To find a date that Kyuhyun can stomach is impossible - unless they hire one to pretend. But not even the perfect companion can stop years worth of threats, or keep their acting from becoming all too real.

Comments

[seneferia]

Omg flailing! I can't believe its over. I'm so happy they got back together. You write such good Qmi fics.

[coley_merrin]

They just had to... No other option. XD <3<3 The end came too soon...

Thank you~! <3

[ranwae]

/lol just totally outed myself as refreshing your lj in the hopes of posting chapter 12 XD

THANK YOU I LOVE THIS SO MUCH ♥

more than the smexy times (which were hot; also, TEEHEE BED PIC MUST HAVE BEEN INSPIRED BY A CERTAIN PIC POSTED BY A CERTAIN CHINESE BALL OF SUNSHINE IN HIS WEIBO, JUST SAYIN' ♥) it was nice to get into kyuhyun's head for this chapter and it was really reassuring to know that whatever his thoughts about thier relationship, his uncertainty about what this is, it still shows that he feels something really strong for zhoumi. the most wonderful thing i think was seeing that even if he himself doesnt want to define what his feelings are for zhoumi, his TRUST for him, idk it just really shows so much. that kyuhyun took him back wholeheartedly without any doubt what they really mean to each other. lol babbling

[coley_merrin]

hehe aww <3

Just a little inspired by that pic. XD And yes, no matter what he can't put words to, there's a need there, there's real emotion there, that can't be denied. <3<3 Assuming they'd figure it out! Trying is not nearly as hard sometimes as giving up...

Straight from Zhou Mi's mouth and full of truth. <3 And more chances to show him~~ <3<3

Thank you~! <3

[rayneweather]

Your ending was wonderful!! Nothing overly sappy or unrealistic (i.e. everything completely figured out and wrapped up in little bows). Even though they care for each other deeply their relationship is still a work in progress; I really like that Kyu is willing to admit that he's not quite sure if he loves Zhou Mi or not. The half empty closet imagery was spot on. Mimi communing with the closet made me giggle. I especially liked that this chapter wasn't just the 2 of them acting like bunnies. Yes, they fulfilled their physical needs however you spent the majority of the time exploring their emotional and psychological needs instead. That's completely in character for the 2 of them - they aren't together because of great sex but because of their other needs that they find fulfilled by the other. If the two of them didn't have such a deep connection on intellectual, emotional and psychological basis their relationship would never work

[coley_merrin]

Still a few bumps for them to get over. :) Even living together, they have a new dynamic to sort through, and little hidden places to get over. <3 They need each other, though~~ They have lots of time to be bunnies. XD Haha~ The sex came after they started to depend on each other... So now they get to do that all over again. <3<3 Good job Teuk for matching them so well. ;)

<3<3

Thank you~! <3

[molly_hime]

I have adored this entire story, and I'm kind of sad it's over, because I always looked forward to the updates. ;-;

But from start to finish, I love it, and the ending is great. <3

[coley_merrin]

They really do end too fast. :( :( <3<3 I'm so glad you enjoyed it~~

Thank you~! <3

[coley_merrin]

The little ways they dependon each other and need and want too. <3<3

Thank you~! <3