second glances

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Gerard/Bert
Standalone
R (swearing, sex)
written March 2008
For bert_and_gerard Remix Challenge. Inspired by Marshmallow by silhouettes1.

Comments

[elaine01]

He would have made a move if they hadn't crossed so firmly into friendship territory. A few months earlier, maybe, he might have tried ... but now? No way

The only thing missing from this story is an explaination for how exactly they went from being such good buddies to avoiding each other. Some incident had to have occurred that scared them both off from each other.

[thatso_rad]

Ha, I loved what Bert did with the marshmellow. He isn't exactly one to be subtle and it's great.
Brillant as always.

[jennifermaria]

My god, my favorites list is full of your stories, and this is a classic example why.

I think this could have been how it started, or something like it. Like they never really intended for it to happen, it just did and then they realized they'd both been thinking about it and leading up to it all along.

[janes_heirloom]

A few months late reading and replying (as usual with me, lol) but still, this is amazing.

I mean, any story that has sexual tension and smushy marshmallows and making out would be good but this is... more.

It's just the way you write it, and the fact that there are more people but it's focused on B&G, and your dialogue is just perfect - so believable.

I love this, as usual.