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commitomemory Dec 30, 2020 21:50

That's right. How's my Driving. GOOD, BAD, WHATEVER.

Axel's a complicated character and I'm not always certain I'm getting all of the aspects of his personality communicated so, um, comment away and let me know?

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commitomemory Sep 06, 2009 18:13

[Video Post]

[His breathing is slow, careful. There is something different about his demeanor, it isn't the normal sarcastic/cocky/insert adjective here that it normally is but rather calm, almost sensitive.

Slowly, he moves a hand to his chest.]

I can....it's really there.

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commitomemory Aug 29, 2009 12:20

You guys don't keep things anything short of exciting, do you? It's enough to make my non-existent heart beat faster.

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I just wish I knew he'd stay this time.

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commitomemory Jul 12, 2009 13:47

It's still weird being back here. But I guess you're still nothing short of exciting. Did Alice do something since I was here before, or is this left over from the whole Saix thing? Because I definitely remember the Queen trying to kill her back then.

So I guess this is 001 again

commitomemory Jun 25, 2009 08:49

Okay, anyone want to fill me in on why I'm, you know, suddenly back here again? Because last time I checked we all had this idea that if you left you either weren't coming back, or you weren't remembering it.

I mean, Roxas didn't remember being here before.

Huh.

I guess I have some catching up to do, then.

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commitomemory Apr 15, 2009 17:01

Maybe he can be everyone's favorite topic of conversation now. Though I kind of doubt that'll happen, knowing everyone.

[Filtered to Naminé]

Naminé - don't let him get to you.

But ...you know where to find me.

Anyway you have Arland so you'll be fine.

[/Filtered]

[Filtered to Roxas]

Hey, do you still have that thing I lent you?

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