Asdf. Admit it, you're addicted to this fandom, you can't leave even if you try. xP
Lovely piece of writing, yes, I beg for more.
“It’s over,” Sasuke said in a bland voice that marked him as Itachi’s brother.
I like that last bit, because I am a sucker for Itachi-Sasuke comparisons and things like that, and bits where Itachi and Sasuke acknowledge each other as brothers even if they want to deny it. Ohohoh.
...it is a sad state of affairs when I have no Sasuke-icon to use with this comment.
I'll beg if you want me to. Who would pass up the chance to get more of any of your Uchihacest?
Loved this beginning. I was confused and thrilled all at the same time.
I'm very interested in the Orochimaru comment. I've been having a lot of thoughts about what would happen if Sasuke's personality remained dominant, even after Orochimaru merged their souls into the same body. Not sure if that's what you mean, but like I said, it's something I've been thinking about so I probably just pulled it out of nowhere.
Come baaack to usss, you know you can't ever really leave. >:D But oh, new Compagnie fic~ *begsbegsbegs*
The Shisui-Sasuke comparisons are rather intriguing. :O Is it just Itachi's sentimentalism? Seeing how Shisui was reportedly Itachi's best friend, what does that say about how he views Sasuke? Sasuke got the mangekyou? Going by your comment to someone else, did he kill Orochimaru? lolol, sorry. XD I'm just little excited. Definitely looking forward to the next part~ :3
I really can't leave, can I? Hee, hee, yes, new fic. :D
Nope, it definitely isn't sentimentalism. But it does show that Sasuke has grown, and Itachi is acknowledging that growth by comparing him to Shisui--and there is another reason Sasuke is compared to Shisui, but if I told you that I would have to kill you. Or, yanno, spoil part two for you. *winks*
Gah! Somehow this didn't appear on my Friends page! ^o_o^ To think I might have accidentally missed this had it not been for an accidnetal click! Please, please don't hangcliff this one. @_@ I've been desperate waiting for a non-angsty plotful version of Itachi-Sasuke fight. Squee! <3
To sum it all up, I'm glad you're writing ItaSasu again, and I can't wait to see where this goes. Orochimaru seems especially intriguing, past-present linkage, hints as to events in the past and future, Shisui references all over, and Itachi's crow genjutsu.. blows my brains out, even though it seems so short.
Like I said, can't wait for the next update, and hopefully LJ will work next time. *kicks*
Eee. I don't know why it didn't appear! D: Bad lj. And um...I don't think there will be any cliffhangers in this. So far it will be two three parts, and I don't foresee any real cliffhangers--so you're in luck!
And thanks, I will pretend to be glad as well. XD;
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Lovely piece of writing, yes, I beg for more.
“It’s over,” Sasuke said in a bland voice that marked him as Itachi’s brother.
I like that last bit, because I am a sucker for Itachi-Sasuke comparisons and things like that, and bits where Itachi and Sasuke acknowledge each other as brothers even if they want to deny it. Ohohoh.
...it is a sad state of affairs when I have no Sasuke-icon to use with this comment.
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Ah, thank you. I'm a sucker for those things too, obviously.
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Loved this beginning. I was confused and thrilled all at the same time.
I'm very interested in the Orochimaru comment. I've been having a lot of thoughts about what would happen if Sasuke's personality remained dominant, even after Orochimaru merged their souls into the same body. Not sure if that's what you mean, but like I said, it's something I've been thinking about so I probably just pulled it out of nowhere.
Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
AHAHAHAHA. Oh god, the next part is definitely going to be something you won't expect, I think. But yes, something did happen with Orochimaru.
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But, yes, lovely start and I'm really, really looking forward to more. :)
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The Shisui-Sasuke comparisons are rather intriguing. :O Is it just Itachi's sentimentalism? Seeing how Shisui was reportedly Itachi's best friend, what does that say about how he views Sasuke? Sasuke got the mangekyou? Going by your comment to someone else, did he kill Orochimaru? lolol, sorry. XD I'm just little excited. Definitely looking forward to the next part~ :3
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Nope, it definitely isn't sentimentalism. But it does show that Sasuke has grown, and Itachi is acknowledging that growth by comparing him to Shisui--and there is another reason Sasuke is compared to Shisui, but if I told you that I would have to kill you. Or, yanno, spoil part two for you. *winks*
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Oh, btw, glad you're back in the 'hood again. =D
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To sum it all up, I'm glad you're writing ItaSasu again, and I can't wait to see where this goes. Orochimaru seems especially intriguing, past-present linkage, hints as to events in the past and future, Shisui references all over, and Itachi's crow genjutsu.. blows my brains out, even though it seems so short.
Like I said, can't wait for the next update, and hopefully LJ will work next time. *kicks*
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And thanks, I will pretend to be glad as well. XD;
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