How's my driving with Yami no Yugi/Atem? Comment and critique here!

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It's almost Halloween, I notice. I believe Kaiba's birthday was on the 25th. Pity I can't wish him a happy one. Not that he'd particularly care for it, especially not here.

Anzu...Are you still here? If you are, please answer. I need to ask you a question.

( Private//Hackable )

( Private )

...Damnit...I tried covering my face to prevent breathing in the gas, but...I think I inhaled it anyhow.

Everyone, the gas is thick, I'd suggest not...not getting caught...caught up in it....

[a silence. A long, long silence. When Atem's voice comes back, he sounds stunned, admirably so...]

Oh....oh my.

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Unfortunate....and yet somehow inevitable.

It doesn't make it any less disheartening.

( Song that pops into his head randomly once he realizes Professor Tomoe is gone//Voice Post )

Quite a few new arrivals....just as the maze ended.

I wonder, perhaps a pattern can be discerned from this. If people were also lost in the maze....

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Hmm.

( Private to Anzu )

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Everyone. Are you all right still?

[sound of screaming]

Of course this damned maze would appear. Gods.

[sound of squealing imps, and also the sound of a weapon slicing through skin - whatever Atem is doing to them, it is not pretty]

If there is anyone aside from your ilk, Tomoe who needs assistance, I will do my best to render it.

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Cold. I hate when it's cold.