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meimi April 22 2008, 14:04:25 UTC
8D Well, Luke had to do something to keep him out of the fight... not that it really worked in the long run. Telling Asch not to do something is about as effective as telling Luke not to do something. :x Stupid, stubborn redheads.

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manicalpha April 22 2008, 07:17:56 UTC
Crazycakes.

Anise has made my night. Also, +++ for God General references, I love to see more of Asch's interaction with them.

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meimi April 22 2008, 14:05:57 UTC
:D Well, I am hoping to delve more into stuff like that, but it's a long way in the future at this point. =\ Gotta get through the stupid saving the world crap and more emo than you can shake a stick at.

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manicalpha April 22 2008, 20:26:47 UTC
I look forward to it! ♥

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darkangel_6 April 22 2008, 13:38:07 UTC
XD XD XD XD "demonstrating a lack of self preservation" that line made me laugh so hard! I also love the part where Asch was smiling to Arietta and she was in denial at Asch being happy and smiling like that - I found that seemed so sad.

I love Asch. I love how you write Asch, I love how you depict Arietta's relationship with Asch - all around epic win! XD but man oh man its a good thing Asch intervened before Jade got after Arietta - otherwise the poor girl would have been completely doomed *nods*

Man - this chapter made me sooo happy~ then again - they all do.

You get a gold star at life.

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meimi April 22 2008, 14:11:21 UTC
Oh man, those kids are just asking to die, ya know? XD I wanted another minigame where you could smother them in the snow. Well~ Arietta's still has a crapton of issues to work through. =( Not that Asch doesn't either, but at least he's worked through some of them. Maybe.

8D Aw, don't worry about Jade. He gets to kill somebody in a serious way eventually~

♥ :D I'm glad you liked it!

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darkangel_6 April 22 2008, 18:58:59 UTC
XD They really are. XD XD XD That would be so much fun!

Yeah - I can imagine, though everyone has quite complex characters - it woudn't be any fun if we didn't have to shuffle through all their issues. It's really nice to see Asch starting to deal with his though. We really didn't all too much of that from him until really late game - so your story is so fulfilling and rewarding that way~

heheheheheeh thats good to hear =D (now just you watch - that's going to come back and bite me in the butt when he kills someone I don't want him to ^^')

=D I absolutely loved it~

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Indeed darkangel_6 October 7 2008, 19:33:17 UTC
Jade might actually need to start keeping a revenge diary at this rate.... >:)

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rokujinshouasch April 23 2008, 03:51:22 UTC
I've read over this about 3 times already, but I just couldn't find the words to properly express how much I heart you for this! XD <3333

I LOVE that you added interaction between the God-Generals in your story. It was something seriously lacking in the game... but as you pointed out yourself, Asch had been with them for several years. Even if he wasn't incredibly close with them, they were still in each other's presence for too long to not be a little acquainted with one another. It reminds me of the ToA novels too... the scene where Asch carries Arietta away from the Miasma seeping the the surface in.... *forgot the river's name* Fabrus?

Anyways... I also can't help but continually wonder about Guy's strange reaction towards Jade's sister and Nephry's reaction to Asch... there seemed to be a little more to it than just knowing he was Luke's original. *ponders*

And of course, Luke's fruitless attempts to scold Asch were just gold. XDDD Poor poor Luke... He tries so hard~ <3 I really liked the interaction between Jade and Nephry ( ... )

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spekularyon April 26 2008, 03:21:30 UTC
Crazycakes. Crazycakes. That has to be the funnest thing ever.

This has too many cute images involving Asch: Asch holding Mieu, and then petting him in reassurance, Ion clinging to Asch, and then Asch sleeping on a liger. It's also fun to think that Asch spent some time with Arietta, or any of the other God Generals. He always seems so distant, so it funny to think, "Oh yeah, he knows them."

*eagerly awaits next part*

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