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concinnity_blue July 28 2010, 08:39:53 UTC
:D Yay I'm glad. That was, in fact, the intended affect. Heee~!

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mrsatterthwaite July 28 2010, 15:43:21 UTC
wow I am appalled there aren't more comments on this! This was really intense and heavy, and it took a lot to get through :( Not because it was poorly written, but because it was so well written, and I actually had to take a few breaks on this to be able to finish it.

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concinnity_blue July 28 2010, 19:25:07 UTC
Thank you, I'm so glad you liked it! I took a lot of time on this one, and I'm glad to know that came across, at least a little bit.

Haha, other explanation: I just really, really like beating people up. ;_;

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herwhereabouts July 28 2010, 21:27:43 UTC
Oh, this hurt. Poor, poor Arthur. You captured both of their fears and anxiety so well, and made it a pleasure to read. Dom offering him whatever comfort he needed felt very true to him, too.

Loved it. <3

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concinnity_blue July 28 2010, 21:41:47 UTC
Thanks! I was glad with how that particular bit came out as well! <3

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skyvehicle July 28 2010, 22:20:14 UTC
This was incredibly hurty, but also incredibly well-written, and the kiss was just... omg! The part in the jail was the absolute worst, though. Even though getting killed in a dream just wakes you up... you're still getting killed, or in Dom's case, you still have to kill someone. Nice writing.

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concinnity_blue July 28 2010, 22:38:15 UTC
Thanks so much!

I think it would always be harder for the killer than the one getting killed, cause if they do it right the one being killed is out in an instant, but the killer still has to force themself to be viscous enough to kill someone they care about. It wouldn't be easy.

As for the kiss, yay! I like writing Arthur not as a wilting violet, or someone who just gets overcome easily. He's really a badass! <3

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adrian_chan July 28 2010, 23:51:18 UTC
I love you. Seriously. This is so much better than what I was expecting when I prompted this. :)

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concinnity_blue July 28 2010, 23:54:39 UTC
Thank you! I'm glad it was something like what you were looking for! <3

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adrian_chan July 29 2010, 04:59:05 UTC
I especially like that the dream did not end in asphyxiation. I feel like this fandom tends to forget that that's not the only way to kill someone without a weapon, lol.

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concinnity_blue July 29 2010, 05:43:15 UTC
Pfft, the fandom is just caught up on the fact that dying of asphyxiation can maybe give you a hard-on. Which, while it has basis in medical fact, would probably be more useful in bed than when trying to get someone out of the dream with the minimum of discomfort and embarrassment.

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