Gah. Okay, first off, this is completely awesome. Loved it all, it's a truly beautiful read. But then that ending. . . *whimper* I mean, it's fantastic, of course, but it's so terrible and heart-breaking at the same time. . . At any rate, this is great, and thanks a lot for sharing. <3
That ending is so painful! I can't even deal. I really loved Cobb in this one, too. He's so fierce. And you always write Arthur so well. His struggle was really hard to read, to be honest, but it added an amazingly tragic element to the story.
Long story short: AWESOME, FLAWLESS, HEART-BREAKING, WORTH THE WAIT, ETC.
Oh, ouch. Lovely and wonderfully written, of course, but OUCH.
You write their interactions fantastically - the dialogue in particular is very good - and this whole thing is a great way to look at the partnership between Cobb and Arthur. Really, really well done!
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WORDS FAIL ME. THIS IS LIKE THAT IRREDEEMABLE DEATHFIC WE WROTE TOGETHER. THE END. GAH.
*HUDDLES IN A CORNER AND CRIES*
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DJ;LSADJG;
GO READ THE FLUFFY FIC AGAIN. THIS AND THAT ARE LIKE ~*~ANTIDOTES~*~ TO EACH OTHER.
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Long story short: AWESOME, FLAWLESS, HEART-BREAKING, WORTH THE WAIT, ETC.
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And, as always, I'm blaming the angst on dorian_mauve so take up any complaints with her. XD
Thanks for turning me on to such a lovely prompt.
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You write their interactions fantastically - the dialogue in particular is very good - and this whole thing is a great way to look at the partnership between Cobb and Arthur. Really, really well done!
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MAYBE I'LL WRITE A FOLLOW-UP IN WHICH THEY BOTH PINE INCONSOLABLY.
AND IT'S ONLY BY THE POWER OF HIS REPRESSED LOVE FOR DOM THAT ARTHUR CAN DEFEAT HIS DEMONS. THE END.
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