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animegoil August 28 2010, 03:41:34 UTC
Fantastic job dealing with Arthur. And his interactions with everyone from the movie - I loved the details about Ariadne and Eames and Yusuf. But Arthur - he was fantastically in character, and it was a very interesting way to express the trauma. Cobb and Arthur's interactions felt very solid and true to the movie <3 I did feel the ending to be a bit incomplete... since nothing was resolved, but that's just my view.

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concinnity_blue August 28 2010, 15:55:35 UTC
Eh, the ending is kind of meant to be... unsatisfying, in some ways. It felt better than just having it magically fixed by the ~*~power of their love for each other~*~ or something.

But I've also been more or less roped in to agreeing to write a sequel, so there'll probably be some sort of clearer conclusion there! XD

Thanks for your comment! ♥

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panda_ne August 28 2010, 08:03:18 UTC
Hey! Me again! When it comes to you writing Art/Cobb, I can't help myself but drop everything else and read ( ... )

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concinnity_blue August 28 2010, 15:58:48 UTC
Hahaha, alright alright, I'll write a sequel guys, sheesh. Just cause not everyone likes UST and major angst and relationship-shattering turmoil! So picky, you guys. XD But it probably won't be all that fluffier than this, and I can't promise a happy ending because I'm just mean.

I'm really glad you liked it, and thanks so much for your kind comment! I love long comments, believe me. ♥

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ihni August 30 2010, 08:58:04 UTC
Beautiful, awesome angst. I love it.

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