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Bent Part 12

Oct 17, 2014 15:47

Title: Bent
Author: Concupid
Pairing: Howard/Vince
Rating: PG-13
Warnings: angst and anger
Summary: Vince makes some connections, Howard makes some chicken.

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pg-13, fan fiction, genderswap, the mighty boosh, bent, angst

Comments 5

bluestocking79 October 19 2014, 05:59:52 UTC

My brain has been SO full of feelings/thoughts surrounding this chapter that it's been hard to know where to begin ( ... )

Part II, because word limits suck bluestocking79 October 19 2014, 06:00:29 UTC

Now they're starting to get some real insight into what drives each other. As Vince has correctly deduced, they have more in common beneath the surface than anybody thinks, and their weak points actually do have the potential to complement one another, when they're working together instead of fighting each other. And that is definitely a step in the right direction ( ... )

littleredchucks October 19 2014, 11:05:14 UTC

Whenever a new chapter of this story appears I have to ask myself "do I have time to be emotionally ruined right now?" and then I wait for a time when I can slowly rebuild myself to read it. So now I've read it and I'm glad I waited cos it shattered me, again.
I just really love your portrayal of Vince especially, because I find him really relatable.
And wanting to stay still and stay close just… made my heart flutter.
This is a rubbish review, sorry. But it was a lovely chapter.

thx4theether October 29 2014, 01:47:04 UTC

"Instead, he wondered why other mothers made their kids take showers and do homework, when his did not. He tried to cheer her up and make her happy, but only with limited success. Sometimes she just cried and there was nothing he could do to help."

No words.

"Instead, he went to Howard and put his arm around his broad shoulders."

Vince is trying!

“'And then he was a grated man.'”

If this was my life, I'd roll my eyes while kind of wanting to shake his hand.

I'm sorry, I'm shit at expressing myself, but I want you to know that we're out here reading and having feelings and I am blown away by the things you managed with the gender swap device.

:)

concupiscence66 November 10 2014, 02:54:30 UTC

I am re-reading and so pleased that you pointed out the grated man line! I was so proud of that.