Writing: One-Shot: Closet Case: Nc-17

[conjure_lass]

Title: Closet Case
Pairing: NYxLondon
Rating: Quite NC-17
Warnings: Fellatio, Frottage, Bad Language
Summary: Plot? Characterization? Skillful use of the English language? This story has none of those things! It does, however, have lovely boys finding out what happens when you lock yourselves in the closet at the New York Stock Exchange. The

Comments

[wisteria02]

Yyyyyyyyeeeeeeesssssss!!!

[conjure_lass]

I'm glad it made you happy! Now its up to you to continue the smut! I think we should totally keep this trend up! More porn is always a good thing!

[wisteria02]

It wouldn’t be the first time, nor the last, and those fuckers only wish they were getting it this good. And this often. And this hard.

*dies from nosebleed*

I've just re-read it again. (Yes thrice now! XD) Y-you... *speechless*

ILU!!! <3

I bet Aeld would LOVE this!!!

And yes, I already have ideas for the continuation. Mwahahahaha!

[conjure_lass]

I thought it turned out pretty well myself! I particularly liked New York's part where he gets to take a ride on London's thigh. For some reason that came out very easily.

Continuation! I await it with baited breath!

And yep, I think Aeld will enjoy it.

[aeld]

I havent even read it read. I just skimmed down to read "HE TAKES A RIDE ON LONDON'S THIGH"

o____________o

i wanna draw that so bad
YAY GOING BACK UP TO READ NAO :O

[conjure_lass]

i wanna draw that so bad

And I want you to draw it. LIKE WHOA. I would actually fall over dead if *any* of this story was ever illustrated. I mean...YEEEEEEAH.

Let me know how you like it! I thought it turned out preeeetttyyy well, myself. :)

[aeld]

Ah...A....@_@

CANNON. ALL THIS IS FUCKING CANNON
IMMEDIATE CANNON >0<

I want you to take over Badin' instead of me. This was FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFucking AMAZING! I havent read fanfiction in years and now i've started this daft little comic and and...@_@
FFFFFFFFFFT its a good job im in a booth on the 6th floor next to the dusty war-lists where no-one ever goes because I COULD FEEL MY FACE GO BRIGHT PINK THATS ENTIRE TIME.

I dont think I blinked once.
Oh my darling. Imperial Leather!! Wartime memories! Nose wrinkling!! Now that part is actually cannon and you're very clever to have spotted it And the way they are around each other <3 you've got it spot-freakin-on

You've made me think otherwise about a chapter I cut from the script yesterday, I thought Badin was getting too long and I cut a whole day and night out, BUT NOW I'M FUCKING PUTTING IT BACK IN.

Way to raise the bar! Please write a book =3= On anything really, on spanners, i'd buy it xxx

[conjure_lass]

I can't take over Badin'! I can't draw!! I can only write. And you're doing fine on the plot all by yourself, trust me.

*BLUSH* I'm glad no one could see you read this, because it is a little porny. Now i'm going to have to write a fic with actual penetration or something. *giggle*

Yeah, I had to ask someone what kind of soap is popular/nostalgic for men over there. She mentioned Imperial Leather and it just so happens that it was around in the second World War. PRETTY MUCH PERFECT RIGHT?

And WEE! I'm glad you're going to leave them in. Surely the boys deserve a nice storyline on their way to true luffs. *laugh*

I promise, someday I will finish my book and I will send you a copy. *smile*

[aeld]

My step-dad and mum still use Imperial Leather =^= You're so clever! It IS a really old brand...I cant stand it its really old-fashioned!

*wants to draw the whole thiiiiiiiiiiing But i cant i cant i cant...i must get on.

*snogs brutally*
<3

[conjure_lass]

Noooo, you mustn't draw the whole thing! Besides, most of it is in the dark anyway. *giggle*

But hey, my birthday is coming up in two weeks here! LMAO Kidding. Kidding.

[aeld]

FANART OF THIS 8O
o yes.
oooo yes.

[orangepencils]

GOODNESS; LOVELY LOVELY WOW!
loooooooooooved this! loved the way you wrote it. and the ending was just so perfect!

[conjure_lass]

*blink*

Oh wow, someone actually commented on this! *squee* That makes me super happy! I know people have read it. I had started to think that maybe it wasn't as good as I'd thought it was.

Anyway!

I liked writing it in present tense. I thought it made it seem more "there" if you get what I mean. I'm really glad you liked it! :)

[orangepencils]

Yeah! The whole present tense aspect of it just made it feel as though it was now and there. not then and whenever XD.