yayayayayayayayayay im so glad you updated! it was so unexpected. i refreshed my page and BAM! its there gosh i feel so bad for Matt... i dont want him to get hurt. if i remember correctly, adam held a GUN to his head right? blahhhhhh i really hope bert is okay =[ and im still a little pissed that frank joined, i mean its extremely hot, but he doesnt know what hes gotten himself into!!!!!
great chapter, it totally beats doing homework lol =]
yay! i cant remember if i commented in the past but this story is sooo good. frikey isnt my fav but this is amazing ^_^ i really cant wait to see what happens next, although i no u dont update much here's some bribery skittles <3 (s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)(s)
Holy mother of jesus. That was so fucking unbelievable. I'm absolutely speechless. You've rendered me, of all people, speechless. FUCK! I really hope that Bert is okay. I really hope he doesn't die. Gerard needs him more than anyone knows. He can't die, he just can't. blegh.
Mikey. dksanbfkbsaj! fucking hell! what a perfect, but so broken little boy. He's so perfect to the outside world, yet, so frightfully beautiful and unpredictable inside. His little outburst was enough to make the straightest man cream. He got so into it, and Frank, god bless him. I fucking adore his character, although I do find him rather stupid for getting himself into all this. It'll either be his downfall, or it will lead to a wonderful and happy love life. I, personally, hope it's the second one. I would absolutely die with happiness if Mikey and Frank fell in loveI feel for Matt
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I shall not reveal the fate of Bert! Muwha! I know, i'm cruel, but if i can leave off telling for 3 chapter i can hold off a little longer :P And if you like Gerard in this chapter, you'll love him in the next one...
Mikey is a very troubled person, and he just needed that aggressive, sexy attention after seeing Bert that way. The underwear thing, that just sorta came in for comic relief :P
And yes, Frank is stupid. Rather stupid indeed. He just doesn't get it and he won't until it's too late, but yeah...
Matt.... well.... Let's just say Gerard isn't gonna be entirely sympathetic but you'll see, soon.
I can't wait until you read the next chapter! It's always a joy to read what you have to say ^.^
*Squeeeeee* You reply has left me with a sense of fear and joy. 3 CHAPTERS?!?!?! I should hate you, but I don't :D! *Prayers for Bert*
Oohhhh, I did adore Gerard's outburst in this one ALOT. I actually can't wait to see what you have in stall for Gee for the next chapter :D
Very troubled in deed. But, I don't blame him. I mean, to be in his position; to be adored and admired for his beauty, yet he feels so lonely and he obviously needs a different kind of attention to feel wanted, I guess.
Oh dear, that means bad bad stuff. Ooeeerrrr. The excitement. I fear for Frank. Silly silly boy. I can only imagine what trouble he's gotten himselgf into, and it ain't good. Nope, not good at all.
OH NO! Matt...poor matt. I do but don't want to know what's going to happen to him. Please be a little sympathetic Gee, pleasepleaseplease. *begs
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The comment above basically sums up everything I have to say.
I've only just gone back and read the previous chapters after reading this latest one, and this story, is indeed, amazing. It's a distinct story, and I'd never thought I'd ever read about some of my most favourite bandom boys (and girl) in a whore house. You've wrote it fantastically well over the backdrop of an interesting plot, and you've managed to pull something like this off.
I don't have a particularly favourite character BECAUSE I LOVE THEM ALL, but one that stands out for me is Adam. Ngh. I'm pretty much a sucker for any band boy and mobster crossover, so I'm really attracted to this type of Adam. I look forward to seeng more of him in this story. :}
I probably have more to say, but I'm kind of too busy flailing.
My friend and I love to shout 'EPIC FLAIL', so that's all i pictured when i read your comment ^.^
Adam is a badass character to write, because i've never written anyone like him before, especially not when its so completely different to how he really is. It's quite a contrast to the reality. You're gonna really hate him soon though...hint hint...
Sorry for the late reply! And i hope you'll come back and read next time i have the drive to actually write the following chapter xx
Oh man I just found this entire thing and read it instead of eating/showering. It was totally worth it. I'm picturing MikeyWay jacking off on your whore-swing and cumming on all the glittery people below, and I can't wait for the next chapter.
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it was so unexpected. i refreshed my page and BAM! its there
gosh i feel so bad for Matt... i dont want him to get hurt. if i remember correctly, adam held a GUN to his head right?
blahhhhhh i really hope bert is okay =[
and im still a little pissed that frank joined, i mean its extremely hot, but he doesnt know what hes gotten himself into!!!!!
great chapter, it totally beats doing homework lol =]
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holy crap! this is like my first fc =]
*does the cracked-out FC happy dance*
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A cookie :)
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The skittles rock, i shall nibble them throughout the update process :P
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That was so fucking unbelievable.
I'm absolutely speechless.
You've rendered me, of all people, speechless.
FUCK! I really hope that Bert is okay.
I really hope he doesn't die.
Gerard needs him more than anyone knows.
He can't die, he just can't. blegh.
Mikey.
dksanbfkbsaj!
fucking hell!
what a perfect, but so broken little boy.
He's so perfect to the outside world,
yet, so frightfully beautiful and unpredictable inside.
His little outburst was enough to make the straightest man cream.
He got so into it, and Frank, god bless him.
I fucking adore his character,
although I do find him rather stupid for getting himself into all this.
It'll either be his downfall, or it will lead to a wonderful and happy love life.
I, personally, hope it's the second one.
I would absolutely die with happiness if Mikey and Frank fell in loveI feel for Matt ( ... )
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I shall not reveal the fate of Bert! Muwha! I know, i'm cruel, but if i can leave off telling for 3 chapter i can hold off a little longer :P
And if you like Gerard in this chapter, you'll love him in the next one...
Mikey is a very troubled person, and he just needed that aggressive, sexy attention after seeing Bert that way. The underwear thing, that just sorta came in for comic relief :P
And yes, Frank is stupid. Rather stupid indeed. He just doesn't get it and he won't until it's too late, but yeah...
Matt.... well.... Let's just say Gerard isn't gonna be entirely sympathetic but you'll see, soon.
I can't wait until you read the next chapter! It's always a joy to read what you have to say ^.^
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3 CHAPTERS?!?!?! I should hate you, but I don't :D!
*Prayers for Bert*
Oohhhh, I did adore Gerard's outburst in this one ALOT.
I actually can't wait to see what you have in stall for Gee for the next chapter :D
Very troubled in deed. But, I don't blame him.
I mean, to be in his position; to be adored and admired for his beauty,
yet he feels so lonely and he obviously needs a different kind of attention to feel wanted, I guess.
Oh dear, that means bad bad stuff. Ooeeerrrr. The excitement.
I fear for Frank. Silly silly boy. I can only imagine what trouble he's gotten himselgf into, and it ain't good. Nope, not good at all.
OH NO! Matt...poor matt. I do but don't want to know what's going to happen to him.
Please be a little sympathetic Gee, pleasepleaseplease. *begs ( ... )
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I've only just gone back and read the previous chapters after reading this latest one, and this story, is indeed, amazing. It's a distinct story, and I'd never thought I'd ever read about some of my most favourite bandom boys (and girl) in a whore house. You've wrote it fantastically well over the backdrop of an interesting plot, and you've managed to pull something like this off.
I don't have a particularly favourite character BECAUSE I LOVE THEM ALL, but one that stands out for me is Adam. Ngh. I'm pretty much a sucker for any band boy and mobster crossover, so I'm really attracted to this type of Adam. I look forward to seeng more of him in this story. :}
I probably have more to say, but I'm kind of too busy flailing.
I love this. Mems. ♥
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Adam is a badass character to write, because i've never written anyone like him before, especially not when its so completely different to how he really is. It's quite a contrast to the reality. You're gonna really hate him soon though...hint hint...
Sorry for the late reply! And i hope you'll come back and read next time i have the drive to actually write the following chapter xx
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Glad you're liking it xx
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