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Second Time Around 8/8 (epilogue to come)

Feb 08, 2010 20:56

Second Time Around

By: cookie2697
Rating: R
Characters/Pairing: Ten/Rose; John Smith/Rose
Beta: lorelaisquared
Setting: AU Human Nature, with a twist.

Author’s Note: Thanks again for all of your great comments. One more part left - the epilogue is still to come! Enjoy!

Chapter 1, Chapter 2, Chapter 3, Chapter 4, Chapter 5, Chapter 6, Chapter 7

( The Doctor was sitting on the floor, his back up against a pillar, the suitcase open beside him, its contents strewn around him. He was holding a piece of paper in his hands, staring at it with a sad look on his face )

writing, doctor who, fanfic

Comments 45

morrighangw February 9 2010, 05:38:02 UTC

*sigh* The first half is so angsty and lovely and THANK GOODNESS they finally talked about the lingering issues between them. And the second half is just so angsty and poor John, with those dark dreams. =(

Can't wait to see the epilogue! =D

cookie2697 February 10 2010, 00:27:23 UTC

Hee! You know what I love about you? Your feedback READS like you haven't already read it! LOL! Are you that excited to see what happens? *huggles you* Thanks for the lovely comments, m'dear!

morrighangw February 10 2010, 00:30:14 UTC

margaretmoony February 9 2010, 05:41:12 UTC

Oh, Rose called the Doctor out on everything, that makes me so happy. I can't wait to see the epilogue!

cookie2697 February 10 2010, 00:28:07 UTC

Yeah, I'm a big fan of Rose being the one to stand up and tell him how it is ;) Thanks for reading! I'm glad you've enjoyed!

pockyxchan February 9 2010, 05:54:28 UTC

Well done, well done. I don't know how you're going to wrap it up, but nicely done.

So Doctor-like to think Rose doesn't want him. Silly bloke.

I will be anxiously awaiting the epilogue.

cookie2697 February 10 2010, 00:29:11 UTC

Yeah, the Doctor is a bit blind when it comes to Rose sometimes. But thankfully she was able to straighten him out! Thanks for reading! I hope you enjoy the end!

wuhdemah February 9 2010, 05:57:53 UTC

Beautiful! :) I'm glad they finally got all that stuff out in the open; otherwise they might have never dealt with it. And that would've been a very... not pretty sight.

I can't wait for the epilogue. :D This has been such a pleasure to read.

cookie2697 February 10 2010, 00:32:27 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and for your lovely comments! I'm glad you've enjoyed!

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aeditimi February 9 2010, 18:18:08 UTC

yummy doctor lips in your icon there.

cookie2697 February 10 2010, 00:35:21 UTC

LOL on your best constructed sentence ever!!! I totally know what you mean though! And yeah, I loved the idea of them unpacking her things together too, so I'm glad you enjoyed that so much. It's like, it's no longer the whole "you're stuck with me" thing we saw in S1...now it's pure acceptance :) I love that too.

And oh! *hugs you for not wanting to see this end* Thank you. That's so incredibly sweet!