Hot Belly

[coolbreeze1]

Title: Hot Belly
Rating: PG13
Warning: Set late season 2, after "Grace Under Pressure"
Word Count: 8,400
Summary: It's a jumper crash story! But mostly it's the team being all teamy together trying to get out of the crashed jumper.

A/N: When I can't fall asleep at night, I dream up stargate stories. I came up with this one and still remembered

Comments

[admiralandrea]

Aw, poor John! Really great fic, thanks. Loved it!

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you!

[tridget]

I love jumper crash stories and this one really really made me smile with enjoyment. The seriousness of the situation was nicely balanced with banter and wry humor (John's declaration that his sandwich was alive and Teyla's wish for a teleportation superpower, for example). John's slow decline due to injury was well done and I liked seeing that Ronon had developed such competence in first aid. It makes sense that he would learn a survival skill so readily.

[coolbreeze1]

Thanks! I had fun with this one. Most of it came to me in large chunks of conversation, and I scrambled to get it all written down before I forgot too much of it. And smart Ronon is one of my favorite characterizations of him. I love seeing him do things other than fight and be very competent at those things.

[syble4]

Wonderful team fic with a nice slice of Shepwhump. :)

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you!

[kriadydragon]

Very nice. I loved that it was Ronon adept at the more involved first aid :D

[coolbreeze1]

Thanks! I always love seeing Ronon do more than just fight and survive, and do it well.

[zanshe]

Another great story, as usual.
I always enjoy a great story with some whumpage and a whole lot of teamy togetherness.
You are a master of engaging your readers. Keep it up.

[coolbreeze1]

Thank you! I had fun writing this story. It was a good team bonding moment.